ImZephyr - Profile

The idea is really solid however the story is held back by the writing everything comes off as a brief summary of what happened not an actual story usually just get a brief description about what took place when characters interact. If you can get over the writing and progression issues then you might enjoy the story for what it is, however its not for me.

Compared to a lot of stories on webnovel this is by no means terrible. But the MC is just kind of there, he doesn't really do anything. So far seems like the author cant decide how to progress the MC so story feels very empty in my opinion as nothing really happens other than a random slaughter every now and then. Story overall is not a bad read if your just looking for something fun but the plot and progression feels pretty empty overall and gets repetitive quickly.