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So far, it's an enjoyable read. However, I believe there is an imbalance between narration, monologue, and dialogue. Readers are only given information from the 'narrator' in each chapter. The dialogue is sparse, while the monologues are almost non-existent. While narration is vital for describing a character's actions; dialogue and monologue are equally important for depicting interaction between characters as well as a character's reasoning, thinking, and motive. I'm hoping to see progress in the following chapters.

These Primitive Universe folks are really irksome. Bu Fang doesn't owe them anything, yet they want him to throw his life away and fight against Soul Demon God for them again. Tongtian don't even pay him the ingredients he promised.

Maybe translator should use 'difference of worlds' instead of 'world of difference'?

The author is back. There are up to Chapter 1571 as of now at MTLNovel.

A better translation of 'senseless lotus' should be 'unfeeling lotus' or 'unsentimental lotus' as the lotus make the user cold and indifferent, not senseless.