Im so convinced that a teenager wrote this book. the amount of “gosh” and “giggle” “y’all” lol not that im complaining but i guess it’s not a deep book.
[Gosh, my hon looks extra dashing today!]
Fantasy · sola_cola
People dont usuallg say “thrice” in normal english convo. “three times sounds better”
Kiho gave him a smile. Then, his hand moved to gently caress her cheek. "Please take extra good care of yourself while I'm gone, Tilly. I'll call thrice a day if I can."
Fantasy · sola_cola
Lol 😂 probablg “ample” ?
When she turned around and looked at her reflection, she felt a little bit embarrassed to see that her butt was very exposed. Thank goodness she still had "apple butt" in this lifetime even though she didn't have time to work out properly.
Fantasy · sola_cola
Such weird narration. it feels awkward reading it cause i feel like a homegirl is talking to me instead 😶lol
[The sex was that good, y'all.]
Fantasy · sola_cola
19 is still a teenager (although legally not) thats why i have such a hard time reading the inner monologue of someone who should be more than 30 adding all their reincarnations . Its just kinda illogical because the way she speaks is very childish and way too girly (i imagine 10 years) for an ***** like her. It just doesnt make sense to me in regards to her age? Like i wouldnt mind if it was a really 15 year old saying but Whole ***** and a half? . Sorry i just cringe . Maybe because Im not the targeted audience 🤷♀️
[Gosh, my hon looks extra dashing today!]
Mommy Villainess
Fantasy · sola_cola