AkiraLight

12d

Replied to UREGO

Bruh

ch 16 The conference...again!

Slice of life in Tensuraverse

Anime & Comics · LuciferTheDevil767

AkiraLight

22d

Commented

The wait begins :(

ch 68 68.

The Tycoon Inheritance

Fantasy · Devoted_laurel

AkiraLight

23d

Commented

The fight scene was okay a bit crude in the way it started, if you explained he was in a trance or built up towards it it would of been fine, it felt a bit sudden (the initial engagement) every time something serious occurs try to build up momentum and you’ll do fine :)

ch 15 Chapter 15 : Garden of Swords

Second Youngest Son (Swordmaster’s Youngest Son Fanfiction)

Anime & Comics · Mr_Moringstar

AkiraLight

23d

Commented

Honestly loved the book and your fanfic. I would recommend you improving the grammer over time

ch 14 Chapter 14 : New friend

Second Youngest Son (Swordmaster’s Youngest Son Fanfiction)

Anime & Comics · Mr_Moringstar

AkiraLight

26d

Commented

Cheers for the chapters :)

ch 49 Feeling Alive

Naruto: Mixed Heritage(Rewrite)

Anime & Comics · Sidecharacter1

AkiraLight

29d

Commented

Great chapter

ch 13 One and two- Alliance

Prius Scribere Loqui (HP)

Book&Literature · STEVIOL_GLY

AkiraLight

1mth

Posted

Highly recommend reading this fanfic. The author knows a lot about the show and portrays all the characters in the best way possible. He even got Sheldon’s speech and personality right and that’s hard to comprehend hahaha. Again give it a try and stop reading this review you lazy ass :)

TBBT: Rajesh’s Rebirth (The Big Bang Theory)

TV · Worldofimagination

AkiraLight

1mth

Commented

Take my stones

ch 0 8 Kevin Mendax

Prius Scribere Loqui (HP)

Book&Literature · STEVIOL_GLY

AkiraLight

1mth

Commented

Great novel, power stones are coming when they refresh can’t wait to travel this journey with you boss

ch 0 6 American Emergency

Prius Scribere Loqui (HP)

Book&Literature · STEVIOL_GLY

AkiraLight

1mth

Commented

Great chapter

ch 62 62.

The Tycoon Inheritance

Fantasy · Devoted_laurel

AkiraLight

2mth

Commented

Thanks

ch 59 59.

The Tycoon Inheritance

Fantasy · Devoted_laurel

AkiraLight

2mth

Commented

Thanks for the chapter :)

ch 21 Evolution…

Inhuman Sorcerer in The MCU

Movies · MorTemTK

AkiraLight

2mth

Commented

Awesome fight and chapter, truly outdid yourself

ch 19 Ronan The Accuser

Inhuman Sorcerer in The MCU

Movies · MorTemTK

AkiraLight

2mth

Commented

Thanks for the chapter

ch 75 Cooperation or buyout?

The contemporary Duke of England

Realistic · Reda_Ouerkat

AkiraLight

2mth

Replied to Mario_Santos_7600

😂😂😂 you probably could and it would be seen as a valid response

Let's play ranked matches then, let's at least promote to silver first. It's a bit embarrassing to be black iron.

Douluo: Ronin

Anime & Comics · primordial_idli

AkiraLight

2mth

Commented

Hey Author thank you for the updates, I do hope the grammer and translation improve because it’s becoming harder to follow the story the flow is broken so far

ch 65 Opportunity to get on the train

The contemporary Duke of England

Realistic · Reda_Ouerkat

AkiraLight

2mth

Posted

The novel shows promise with a strong plot and engaging characters, but it faces a significant hurdle that could deter readers from making it halfway. The grammar is notably subpar, with occasional translations feeling poorly executed, and the overall writing flow lacking coherence. Reading becomes a challenge, requiring constant effort. To truly shine, the novel needs thorough editing. It would be beneficial if the translator considers utilizing external tools like Grammarly for improvement.