Ooh yeah I have read that fic and I did enjoy it. The author had a bit of difficultly with character development along such a huge timeline so the only advice I would give is establish the characters well at first and don’t be afraid to some time skips here and there. The author is in breeze through eternals had to somehow get his characters from the Age of Babylon to modern day which is quite tricky from a Author’s perspective so I wish you the best of luck and I can’t wait to read it😅👍
A/N: I'm a bit burnt out at the moment, as you can see from the length of this chapter and the quality. So I'm planning to take a break after this and write something else to refresh myself from this book. I'll probably be back around the time when HOTD season 2 is airing, probably early to mid july. in the meantime I'm probably going to upload another book that is not as demanding to write as this one, or maybe not.
TV · Giver_Of_Crabs_165
Fair enough. I’d rather quality chapters every once in a while, than bad chapters bc you’re burning yourself out. Any ideas you have for future projects ?
A/N: I'm a bit burnt out at the moment, as you can see from the length of this chapter and the quality. So I'm planning to take a break after this and write something else to refresh myself from this book. I'll probably be back around the time when HOTD season 2 is airing, probably early to mid july. in the meantime I'm probably going to upload another book that is not as demanding to write as this one, or maybe not.
TV · Giver_Of_Crabs_165
Why would the Author need to nerf the MC for the Riser Fight? It’s pretty clear that the MC is way more powerful and is only being given to Rias’s peerage as a loan. After the Fight, he becomes high class instantly.
ch 74 That One Training Arc - 8
Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0
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ch 30 Quick question
TV · Giver_Of_Crabs_165
It’s a one tomoe at the moment I think. And yes normally any level of the Sharingan can use genjutsu , but I think author made a statement of wanting the Mc learn some stuff slowly by himself.
ch 15 Chapter 15 - Cintra 08!
Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague
Tbh I was expecting more of an elvish sword? Ye know bc the whole theme of the mc and his family, is that their all elves.
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Anime & Comics · SleepySailor
😂I absolutely pictured the God Emperor sitting on a coach eating popcorn ,completely fascinated by the Lobster Documentary in front of him
"Contrary to popular belief, lobsters feed exclusively on seafood. However, this does not prevent them from remaining very human..."]
Book&Literature · DaoistWDfd8h
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I prefer this form as opposed to the AI versions. A lot less exaggerated description and the story flows a bit better. It will also help with your writing skills as well. Anyway thanks for the chapter. Can’t wait to see what poison gu he comes up with.
ch 0 8 **Chapter 8: Reward*
Book&Literature · ACDPQS
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Once we did I brought them both back to Ossus and began explaining my life so far to them. Including my goals, the adventures I've been on, etc.
Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
I have to say that I’m liking this situation you’ve built with the Insanity god and Rom and how’s its them against the multiverse type thing. I don’t usually like the stories with multiple reincarnates and multiple gods bc it’s just really hard to juggle that many characters and strorylines. The way you have done it is actually really interesting. Anyway thx for the chapter
ch 34 Rahvdal's Gift and Price.
Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234
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He was her source of pride and her secret lover now. No one knew that second part, but Zekram looked away before speaking.
Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234
I think this is a typo. Zekram is Venelena’s secret lover?
He was her source of pride and her secret lover now. No one knew that second part, but Zekram looked away before speaking.
Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234
However, that idea didn't last long once the memory of Night Guy appeared in his mind.
Anime & Comics · Perma_Frost
Is there a reason he decided to introduce himself with that stûpid nickname eatslug instead of some normal Japanese surname ? Like sure it’s funny nickname but actually introducing yourself as that is a bit weird.
ch 0 8 Naruto : Domination: Chapter 8
Anime & Comics · sybife
Most of those beings are around tier 10 / 11 so Edward will being in constant danger I’d say. Like sure gaining necron technology and Pysker abilities could catapult him to Tier 11 but it’s probably ridiculously dangerous.
ch 559 Government Interference
Book&Literature · LazySageDao
I like the cover aswell. I assume you going to structure you main character’s around the figure at the top of the cover pic?
A/N: I'm a bit burnt out at the moment, as you can see from the length of this chapter and the quality. So I'm planning to take a break after this and write something else to refresh myself from this book. I'll probably be back around the time when HOTD season 2 is airing, probably early to mid july. in the meantime I'm probably going to upload another book that is not as demanding to write as this one, or maybe not.
The Crab's Dance - A Celtigar's Tale [REUPLOAD]
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