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É original. Vale a pena ler, e tem poucas situações clichês, apesar de não ser uma história incrível, eu ainda recomendo!............................

It's a well-written story, and the main characters are satisfactorily developed, however, the number of chapters seems to be unsatisfactory for the author to be able to extract the full potential of what has been presented so far (until chapter 40, which is where I left off) . There are also some uncomfortable little points to read, but hard to imagine, like the fact that the protagonist has been a virgin for 100,000 years, or simply the age of the characters (the youngest so far is 400 years old), the protagonist is 100,000 and his wife 200.00... I can only imagine an elderly couple, even if they look young. In the end the story is good, the negative points are small and don't interfere with the experience, I just wish it was a story with a bigger development (and with more chapters!), but anyway I'll keep reading until the end, until now I recommend it!

I read up to chapter 6, this is too bad, it's impossible to continue. Maybe it's the most annoying pair of characters I've read to date, and if that was the author's intention, then congratulations, because this submissive protagonist and this disgusting girl managed to screw up the story.