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Start ok, with a few laughs. Then came the rape, which after doing the deed., The female victim feels great and falls for MC. For me this is a huge problem, and I cant see how the author expects to have a wide following when your alienating half the reader's ie the females and right minded males. What is worse, and which happens in a lot in these novels is that the female who was raped becomes enamoured with the rapist even becoming dao partners. Apart from that various parts of the book are repetitive and overly long and feels like the author used these parts to hike up the word count. That being said I like the idea of the MC losing control of his actions when using the system often making things difficult for MC.

Feels a bit like a kide wrote it. Smoking is portrayed as cool, and apparently throwing cigerate butts in to rivers etc happen, while not a big problem still irked me. There are hints of pedophila when describing 13 yrs old and how thier panties keep flashing . The areas on earth the MC goes to are not researched very well, it seems a quick scan of the internet was all it took to find any old erroneous information. As well as offering the opinon that Chinese poetry is the best on earth ( hey I get having pride in your origin country), but it gets old with all the, how wonderful and more impressive Chinese are. Yes I know it's a Chinese writer but c'mon haven't you heard of the Bard. On saying all that the concept of the story is fine. And the translation is very good. Just seems a bit immature.

I had to drop it after the author went in a direction that's becoming more common of the west are all barbarians, especially America, wanting to rule the world while the Chinese are far superior and united etc. Apart from that story is slow to develop. Save yourself some time and irritation by passing on this novel.