keep up the good work
ch 17 Shall we start?
Fantasy · AJPaturde
Personally I liked the story it isn't rush covered details etc. And for the critiques, you aren't paying him to write so shut the hell up
ch 20 Life 1.6: Lighting blade-Part 2
Anime & Comics · Sam_Wade_7438
nice keep it up
ch 15 The voice notification.
Fantasy · AJPaturde
It's good right
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Fantasy · AJPaturde
The writing quality is good. The grammer is mostly correct. The action scenes are not cringed and are well written. Looking forward to next chapter. Hope you keep up the good work and continue to novel
HighSchool DxD: Fan-fic
Anime & Comics · Sam_Wade_7438