Lucifer122333

3yr

Posted

The writing quality is good. The grammer is mostly correct. The action scenes are not cringed and are well written. Looking forward to next chapter. Hope you keep up the good work and continue to novel

HighSchool DxD: Fan-fic

Anime & Comics · Sam_Wade_7438

Lucifer122333

3yr

Commented

this chapter was good waiting for next chapter hope you would post it soon

ch 22 NEW LIFE

HighSchool DxD: Fan-fic

Anime & Comics · Sam_Wade_7438

Lucifer122333

3yr

Commented

keep up the good work

ch 17 Shall we start?

The Paranormal system!

Fantasy · AJPaturde

Lucifer122333

3yr

Commented

Personally I liked the story it isn't rush covered details etc. And for the critiques, you aren't paying him to write so shut the hell up

ch 20 Life 1.6: Lighting blade-Part 2

HighSchool DxD: Fan-fic

Anime & Comics · Sam_Wade_7438

Lucifer122333

3yr

Posted

Personally I am liking this story. This is a Fan-fic so it's upto Author on what to write and what not. Besides stop complaining you aren't paying him to write. So it's a good Fan-fic I would recommend it. It's not overpowered but it has lots of potential.

HighSchool DxD: Fan-fic

Anime & Comics · Sam_Wade_7438

Lucifer122333

3yr

Commented

nice keep it up

ch 15 The voice notification.

The Paranormal system!

Fantasy · AJPaturde

Lucifer122333

3yr

Posted

Good novel. One of the best novel I have read of this genre. Keep up the good work Author AJPaturde. Good writing. Easy to understand since there are no complicated words. All the best! Looking forward for next chapter