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what is "the compound of section B"? Perhaps use "The Section B Compound"?
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Fantasy · Entrail_JI
"If I had a better..." -> "If I had better"
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Fantasy · Entrail_JI
appears to be a run-on sentence. suggest "as better psyon..." -> "since better psyon"
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missing end punctuation
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missing end punctuation
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missing end punctuation, suggest comma
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ch 113 Undercurrents [1]
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Fantasy · Entrail_JI
wakened -> weakened
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shuder -> shudder
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"towards the distance" -> missing period
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Fantasy · Entrail_JI
"Seemingly trying her best to recover he energy" -> "Seemingly trying her best to recover her energy"...
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Fantasy · Entrail_JI
In Soviet Russia, car drive you.
And without warning, once again she pulled against Luan's collar and kissed him, but she couldn't quite find the target. The woman's kiss fell on Luan's face and then walked away.
Rise of the White Dragon
Fantasy · Lruska
“Red flashes are outdated by galactic standards, but Ves always had a theatrical side to him. There is some sense of nostalgia that lenses without flash seem to be missing, which led to Ves’s decision to purchase an antique camera back in the Sentinel Kingdom.”
ch 2693 Value of a Mech Designer
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
Bad grammar here. Author uses passive voice and past tense here, suggesting that the system already performed the task when Qin Yi is clearly instructing the system to perform a task. Consider "System, target the deacon for extraction!" or "System, extract from the deacon!"
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I Can Extract Everything
Eastern · Mysterious_Pen
i guess pet novels are popular? hard to say lul
google it. its a thing.
The meadow was separated into four plots that were individually planted with wheat, rice, anther, and black rapeseed.
My Debauched Devotion
Eastern · Immortal Pigeon
Its just unreadable. The original world background sounded somewhat interesting, with another "reincarnation to try again" genre. With this big of a cheat, the MC is guaranteed to do very well already. Except the 10,000X Upgrade System makes the main character so absurdly powerful that after 5 chapters the MC is a literal one man army able to slay gods. There are no meaningful side characters. There are no meaningful antagonists. The main character trumps everything by virtue of existing.
Tribe: I Become Invincible With My 10,000x Bonus From The Start
Fantasy · Strange Human