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Honestly I think you should not have the system. At first I assumed that this was a case of we're blazing past high school and going straight to the nba But I genuinely like regrowth of the protagonist here. It feels genuine and I feel like if you add a system to it. It will devalue all the work you've put into it. If you feel like you need to put a system into it, don't give him like templates. Or extra points. Give him a character sheet. Give him away to rank his abilities and his physical stats and allow him to be able to make accurate and effective training programs. This gives them a good tool without devaluing the struggle he has to go through

The problem I am seeing is that, even if they beat yosen, I don't see them winning against too or rakuzan. Lets assume that furihata obtains the zone. Aomine has it too and is much more skilled at using it. He can not only use it for much longer periods of time but can also activate and deactivate whenever he pleases. Plus his physical ability surpasses furihata at a significant level, so if they're both in the zone then aomine has the edge.

Great chapter. One thing I am curious of, is how much time is there between the inter-high and the winter tournament. Because although they have improved, its only been a few weeks since the team faced aomine, and I don't think they could beat them. So they are gonna need more time to improve. Especially furihata if he wants to be able to complete physically with the other generation of miracles. Akashi was able to stay the entire time in the game in canon.

I just noticed that you wrote furihata as 175 cm here when you said he was 170 when he faced midorima. amd the wiki states him as 170. small mistake but it should be fixed

I honestly hope kagami doesn't unlock the zone. If anything, I think Alex should over rule the captain and put in furihata, and his anger and desire to prove himself will allow him to unlock a new level of playing for him, to show that he could keep up with even the generation of miracles even without their talent.

Alright looks like the team is preparing for the last game needed to qualify before they get the summer to train and improve. Obviously, furihata needs to develop his athleticism. While he has the knowledge and the technique, he needs to develop some monster athleticism, at least compared to how he is now. Honestly I am really loving this story I really want to see you try to do other stories on other sports anime.

I'm not sure if you plan on writing any other stories, but I was wondering if you would be interested in one about the manga hajime no ippo. It is a boxing manga that is still ongoing right now. I'm super curious on what kind of spin you would put on it.

very nice chapter, glad to see kuroko improving. My main concern is how furihata is going to stay relevant. Yes he is well rounded and has good overall skills, he just can't compete physically with the generation of miracle players. Everyone could beat him, so what are you gonna have him do to remain relevant?

very interesting. let's see what happens next. hope his growth isn't too great. I do like when the Mc puts true hard work into it, but this protagonist doesn't seem lazy at all

Really interesting, excited to see how he does when learning how to use alchemy. I am also curious how he plans on dealing with his trauma because the past few chapters have shown that he hasn't taken the time to truly accept it has happened. On a separate note any recommendations on novels you would recommend? Curious what you would recommend for cultivation novels.

Enjoying the story so far. I don't specific chapter numbers but there have been a couple of misspellings and wrong names. Sometimes you would mistake his name as Li instead of He. Especially during the beast tide part of the story. Small mistakes here and there but that is it. Keep up the great work

Well furihata is in big trouble. He needs to find a way to either counter aomine or at least prevent the score from increasing. in order to do that he and kuroko need to essentially hit the nitrous and go all out. The problem is that neither are blessed with even an above average physique even if they did train hard. Even if they do succeed they'll still lose the war due to having no stamina.

No, I don't think it is that slow. Cultivation doesn't seem as widespread as other novels like martial world so this pace seems good.

I actually really like this premise. There's a lot of reincarnation or transmigration stuff. But I do like this one in that the character is genuinely walking to enjoy his new life. There isn't any golden finger, no special system. Hes not overpowered. This is what I like.

Awesome chapter. I am curious about the specs of the mc. His height and weight currently. The fight itself was well written. It was short but it had plenty of descriptors without bogging it down. I am excited to see what happens next

awesome chapter. the writing seems to be improving as well. I can't remember did you ever describe your character. I can't remember how tall he is or his weight.

Flow of power. redirection kata anyone?