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Commented "Had and had" I'm not quite sure I understand what you mean here author thanks for the hard work tho
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Fantasy · Blue_Robin
1yr
Commented You probably need to add "to" to the sentence as how use fat doesn't work Otherwise well done I'm just pointing it out as it's the only mistake I've seen so far
My eyes flicked over to the stove as I began to consider how use the fat of the meat to make the oil I would use.
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Fantasy · Blue_Robin
Might be worth just having "had" and remove the "had and" to make more sense
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