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"You're the Purple-Flamed Divine Dragon, Naga. Burn yourself with Thunderfire. It would warm your heart." Huo Yuhao commented with a chuckle.
Anime & Comics · Nine_Clouds
Bro is me💀
''Don't worry I'll help you'' she replied with a big smile. '' Let's see I like to fly, I also like to race against Carol and I have a beautiful daughter that I love very much''
Movies · Fast_Reader
No, it was my mistake [img=faceslap]
His plan worked and the claw missed! Minato was quick and sealed half the nine tails into his child and the other half back into his wife effectively saving both of them. The nine-tails cursed his fate and was forced back into his seal.
Anime & Comics · Zekt
This was my mistake, I remember orochimari being fine after using it to unseal the page but now going back in sure I missed something. Allow me to apologize for the mistake 🫶
His plan worked and the claw missed! Minato was quick and sealed half the nine tails into his child and the other half back into his wife effectively saving both of them. The nine-tails cursed his fate and was forced back into his seal.
Anime & Comics · Zekt
I’ll release 3 more chapters today just cause did this
Don't worry chapter 3 is in the works and that's when you'll get a description! reason? He didn't have a way to check his apperance before and was to busy
ch 0 1 001: Three blessings and Reincarnation!
Anime & Comics · Zekt
Yeah, I can. I’ll put it in a auxiliary chapter whenever all three girls are chosen. Two of which I already have in mind but I might let yall decided the third. Oh there will only be three
ch 0 1 001: Three blessings and Reincarnation!
Anime & Comics · Zekt
Shameless author review, tehe. Also, reminder as of 11/15/2023 the story won't be updating regular. I'll try to get far enough in my other novel "Wandering Empress" so I can but I'll let everyone know. Right now, this work is in a beta period.
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Sorry, I was away for a few days. I see and understand what you are saying. I understand that early chapters are important but sometimes early chapters are just that “early”. Not all stories start out fully fleshed or thought about. For example, when I started this one I didn’t really have an idea for the gritty details, I just had an idea but now through writing continuous chapters I have a drastic improvement in the direction I want to take this novel. The reason I don’t go back and rewrite the early chapters, while yes, not to make people have to re-read it’s to also show the improvement which I feel is also important to have. (I know I responded before but it’s like 3-4 days ago so I’m not sure if I repeated anything here) I really just want you to know that I really appreciate your feedback and I will work on it in the future and future works. Thanks for your time, Zekt
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Sorry, I can’t edit my comment apparently so I’ll have to just add this one. It’s really understandable and all I can say is I feel I fixed some of the things later or at least made it more bearable later as I felt this way as well after re-reading everything so I’ve tried to not to…make things as hectic? Or weird? As well as I’m still trying to fix something’s you’ve pointed out. I can’t redo the chapters as it’s too late and I’m not going to make people re-read from the beginning. Thus, I’m putting emphasis on making sure the mistakes don’t happen again. Again, I really appreciate the feedback it means a lot!
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I didn’t say you were wrong. I appreciate the feedback. i can see it from your pov and I appreciate the honesty
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Well, I won’t pay you since I ain’t got free money like that. However I will say thanks for the feedback 🗣️
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🤣I can’t deny that, I haven’t seen many like that
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I really don't know how to respond to this without spoilers but know I appreciate the feedback. All I can say is keep reading though I revised these earlier chapters it was mostly grammatical errors rather than actual information. I came back too late to make significant changes which is why the information didn't change. All I can say is keep reading and hopefully things become clearer and smoother for you.
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Don’t worry about the release schedule nothing has changed. My dumb self just forgot about the time difference and schedule things wrong.
ch 0 9 Chapter 9: Team GOAT...nah but fr Team 1
Reborn in Naruto: Journey of Satoru
Anime & Comics · Zekt