This simp culture nowadays.
We see Noah sleeping on his bed peacefully when suddenly his phone rings which he ignores and after a minute the ringing stops due to which Noah is relieved and starts to fall deeper into sleep when suddenly the phone starts ringing again irritated by this Noah picks up the phone and says "Who the hell... (shift in tone) Hello Blair what can I do for you... Why should I come with you to buy clothes again?? Ahh yes to pay the bills of course. No please you don't need to bother I will come and pick you up... Yes, I will be there by 11." He then ends the call looks at his phone and says " She can't be human dammit the things I do in the name of friendship" sighs as he gets up from his bed and walks to the bathroom to get ready.
TV · Hellblaze
where can i find the raw or mtl of this?
ch 86 Writer's Notes
Realistic · Reda_Ouerkat
So being dumb is ok according to you?
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Fantasy · Meowder
A man must be an eunuch especially a powerful man who restricts himself to the whims of one woman.
ch 11 Chapter 11-And so blows the wind of war!
Anime & Comics · Drkest
I suggest using grammarly to write.It helps a lot.
Global Marital sect seriously ? Fix it bro.I think you meant Martial.Marital means marriage.
ch 0 1 My Earning Sect System
Fantasy · Atul_jha
The huge usage of profanity is not good.If you are seriously writing a fantasy novel be mature about it and use good vocabulary.The constant usage of profanity in every few lines decreases the quality of the work otherwise a great start .Also I need to know if it's going to be a democracy nobles bad novel cause I came here with the title expecting a proper aristocratic structure with monarchy.I have seen all the modern corrupt democracy or ccp for one lifetime in real life.So far in modern world the citizens of monarchies are thriving.
ch 0 2 [2] Lyrinthia
Fantasy · Enejiang
What he meant was it's just a rehash of equality for all purebloods sucks story so far.You don't address the problems with muggleborns at all.They are like colonisers who go to another country and criticize their culture as backwards and barbaric.Also muggles and wizards can't coexist.Muggles if they find out about wizards will use them as weapons or experiment on them.Also wizards have long lives and they have a much more free society so of course they look down on muggles who discriminate on basis of caste,creed, religion, gender etc .Wizards have been all about gender equality from the beginning since there is no concept of physical society there since wands are the great Equalizer.
ch 0 6 Emily Shafiq
Book&Literature · Nathe07
While the idea is fascinating the whole muggles and wizards coexisting is ridiculous.Humans like to think they are at the top of the food chain if they one day suddenly find out they are not they will either try to control the power wizards in this case or experiment on them to get the abilities themselves.So the whole idea is ridiculous.Also when you see the whole thing from a mature perspective the purebloods had some very good reasons to hate muggleborns.They were like European colonizers who go to another country spit on their traditions and culture as backwards barbaric.So of course the purebloods have every right to be mad.I think only Grindelwald had the right idea his process was too brutal but his objectives were correct.
ch 0 4 4 Train Me!
Book&Literature · BronzeTurtle
Lance is blackthorn clan member.Please dont't skip details like that and simply say dragon clan.Atleast basic research on original work is expected when you are writing a fanfic.Otherwise the premise is very fascinating.
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Anime & Comics · Anomander_Adaar
Better DCEU since I think recently their potential has been stubbed.Dont be copycat about everything I guess.
ch 17 That's a Big Closet
TV · Illusiveone
while I get the character is not shonen naive but no need to make him unnecessarily a sociopath lots of those around already.A normal guy is much more preferable with dreams and ambition as readers can relate to that more.
ch 0 -3 Synopsis
Anime & Comics · DemiGod_2972
That's great to hear it's a good story otherwise.My thing is whenever you imagine an adventurer in any culture they carry a gourd full or pouch with em.Especially sailors and their rum is the stuff of legends.When you are out alone in the dark wilderness a good drink just does wonders.
ch 0 3 Chapter 3: Improved ability
Transmigrate to the world of The Lord of the Rings?
Movies · Ax_nevermay_cry