Knowing you, this sentence could be written as "Si Ren is already dead!"
"Tian Di is already dead! Do you really not know?"
Fantasy · Tomoyuki
How pragmatic.
"Let me find Tian Di. You can do whatever you want with him."
Fantasy · Tomoyuki
With all the plot threads resolved, this seems like a good place as any to end the story. I didn't expect the penultimate chapter to be a goblin slayer parody but hey, at least it ended on a good note. I'm looking forward to read more stories of yours in the future. Ciao.
ch 141 Epilogue
Fantasy · Tomoyuki
Unexpected downfall reference, nice.
"If Stryker attacks, everything will be all right." Holding a couple of pencils in my hand, I waved my fingers around. I didn't know why the fuck I was holding a few pencils at once – it wasn't as if I was going to draw with more than one of them. Maybe I was making some sort of point.
Fantasy · Tomoyuki
Lame joke, but it works. It actually got me to laugh. Did you come up with Shi Ting's name with this joke in mind or was it a stroke of literary genius?
In a couple of strokes, I added a T to Shi Ting's name. Then I slowly swept the notepad around for all to see.
Eastern · Tomoyuki
Some might call this chapter filler but I like it. It gives the story time to breathe. The MC can't be training/fighting every chapter. It also helps that the taekwando match was decently engaging.
ch 19 Chapter 19: True Friends
Eastern · Tomoyuki
I'm not suprised that you didn't know that Kaiji had something similiar. To be fair, it would involve spoiling the ending to Kaiji 1, so it's not really something people quote.
After all, the moment I gave up and blamed everything on fate…that was when everything was really over.
Eastern · Tomoyuki
Good quote, though I associate this quote more with Kaiji 1.
After all, the moment I gave up and blamed everything on fate…that was when everything was really over.
Eastern · Tomoyuki
Dio reference? I thought you didn't watch JoJo.
"Useless! Useless! Useless!" Ba Bai was shouting as he threw another punch at me. "It doesn't matter if you become a cultivator! You can't beat me!"
Eastern · Tomoyuki
A love comedy wuxia novel eh? It's an unusual premise from you, but I like it so far.
ch 0 1 The Challenger Long Ao Tian
Even the Heavens Can't Stop My Love!
Fantasy · Tomoyuki