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2019-08-15 Joined United States
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20 days ago
Posted

The cheat is decent and the overall plot development is pretty typical of douluo fics. However the story uses AI way too much with the word choice and writing format being very obviously AI. Like I didn’t know it was AI but I noticed right away because it was too much summary and abridged writing. Writing as if there is extra meaning when it doesn’t need to be elaborated. Also the characters are just kinda flat likely also because of the AI usage. I want to see how the story progresses but it’s just hard to read and I can’t really expect anything special.

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No_Name_Found
1 months ago
Posted

Raw name? Character fill. Character fill. Character fill. Character fill. Character fill. Character fill. Character fill. Character fill. Character fill.

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3 months ago
Posted

The only thing I want to complain about is the grammar. It’s annoying to read because every other sentence is a run on sentence with a bunch of commas and “and.”

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3 months ago
Replied to 130031

人在斗罗 开局被玉小刚刺杀

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No_Name_Found
9 months ago
Commented

Personally really didn’t like the politics with unova directly becoming america. I get unova’s based on American but directly mentioning the white house just breaks the illusion man.

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11 months ago
Replied to CosmicKaminari

Raw name?

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1 years ago
Replied to Ambitious_Guy

I found the right raw 人在精灵刷词条,养成妖皇沙

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No_Name_Found
1 years ago
Commented

I know I knew the answers to half of these questions at some point but forgot all of them the moment I graduated.

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No_Name_Found
1 years ago
Commented

Ahhhh, this was what that review was talking about with this author writing heroines that have had a bad end.