ThePandaCritic

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Ofc no one feels the relationship 😪....u ruined tht. It was so gud.

ch 209 Wealth

Tycoon Actor in Hollywood

Movies · NewComer714

ThePandaCritic

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Drake is finsh bruh tf ru skipping kendric domestics ...like enjoying beef is 1 thing taking sides with substantial proof is another.

ch 34 Styles

Convict to King

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Wts the point of the chapter if he's not winning anything could said he didn't win or simply Mention the jokes in an article...could've use this chapter to either develop a relationship with someone...female or hv him delop more music or some book or sumthin

ch 205 Golden Globes Conclusion

Tycoon Actor in Hollywood

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I mean they r together, I don't see why Ricky can't cast her in his movies to keep them together. They alrdy hv chemistry n they r together n the public love a gud love story

ch 66 Lost in Translation

Snakes and Ladders (A Hollywood SI/OC)

Movies · Archonstine

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Really if ur their friends just spill the beans ...u don't a say it all lie ...say a fren of ur got hurt or sum

ch 201 Lucas's reminder

Tycoon Actor in Hollywood

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ThePandaCritic

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Another day n still no social media

ch 200 Initial Success

Tycoon Actor in Hollywood

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Thoughts it's an interesting idea. The grammar is great. The presentation of the status in most of the chapters is awesome. Problems, first Idk If ur waiting to make the connection or not but the system choice for a rapper for the Mc whn the only connection to rap for him is jail time and where he lived. There seem to be no history there of a young someone who's trying but don't hv a break or something thts rooted in rap hence why the system choose him and also a rap system. Also the Mc seem to not be interested in finding this out also and another thing which is forgotten or maybe it turn into the butler, the system is sentient like n the Mc is just chill with that WHY also that aspect of the system is not explore after tht. Another thing is since the system cn create a human per say and money and also a house with equipments, it begs the question is this magic or mechanical because again this doesn't seem to bother the Mc 1 bit like how's this happening. Also I'm curious why hv the Mc use a label whn theres SoundCloud or Spotify to grow ...Maybe sing in the streets or at those pop up bars with a little crowd to build a following.

Convict to King

Movies · AmSincere

ThePandaCritic

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Another chapter where he's nt on social media as yet 😕

ch 194 Beef

Tycoon Actor in Hollywood

Movies · NewComer714

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God I hope he don't end up with Jen idk I just like her character...as I've said I like the character of Liz or someone not of his wrld

ch 190 Encountering them again

Tycoon Actor in Hollywood

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Bad ...hmm hv him live Abit ..take risk on some projects....hes Rich enough to do so....try new techniques in movie shooting.

ch 209 HWI 209

Hollywood What If

Movies · pujimaki

ThePandaCritic

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Maybe it just me I don't like the character of Jen would've prefer some like Liz or sum one not an actor ...

ch 188 Reuniting with the two beauties

Tycoon Actor in Hollywood

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I mean If ur being cautious u always choose the meeting spot n since they want a meeting with u ...he had that power...no need to worry about camera

ch 208 HWI 208

Hollywood What If

Movies · pujimaki

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All of that power n still wanna hv an in with Tony makes no sense...also Mcu how ....how is that still happening with all of the destruction she be causing where is the ripple effect also ....

ch 96 Chapter 96 - Helping Tony Stark

In Marvel as The Hive

Movies · ZeroX0666

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1mth

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Wt novel is this frm

ch 175 RTS Mod Completion

Tycoon Actor in Hollywood

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Im one of the ORIGINAL readers that read this novel from the start chapter 1 up to chapter 214, i stopped reading to stock up chapter months ago this novel was amazing the mc was great the story / plot is good and his interaction and romance with his harem was my favorite. But now after returning after months seeing how this Amazing novel i loved in the past turned into an Absolute chaotic MESS it really leaves me saddened, My beloved novel is not what i once LOVED. Like how victor stealed his mother From his Respectable father. NTR/C*CKED Im gonna stop reading at chapter 214 and leave this novel at a Good Memories instead of Dirtying this Beloved Novel by reading more chapters ahead