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often times lighnovels that are in 1000 chapter range is badly written, got lot of fillers, bloated and idiotic. these is exactly what this novel is. at chapter 273 the writer disrespect readers intelligence by making the story so idiotic the sole purpose is to extend chapters. writer could have wrote common sense and solve the problem with two chapters but decided to make protagonist so stupid thus creating 20 chapter of cringe.

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it was written well. not the usual bloat in this kind of genre. off course it was unoriginal but 80 percent of these genre share almost the same plot. well written but unfinished.

the writer overly complicate every plot progression just to increase word count. the problem is the story become unnecessary convoluted and unrealistic. even though it is only 500 chapter the writing style is bloated and unfocus. im at chapter 300 and i feel that you can remove 30 percent of the chapter without affecting the story. shaving chapters could have improve the writing. if this novel is a dance then there is a lot of ungraceful and unnecessary movement that make you no longer appreciate the product. my review could be harsh maybe because i just read the works of steinbeck before reading these. and there is a lot of difference in writing quality.

unfocus and bloated writing style. so many sub- arc that doesnt move the story forward. needless exposition. inefficient fighting strategies. the writer chose to write in quantity of chapters sacrificing quality. if he could rewrite this to 300 chapters removing the bloat- this could be less frustrating read.

you can put the ending in the middle and it wont change the story much. it has an undeveloped story and the writer has a bloated writing style. children would like this but adults with firm grasp of logic would realized the writer is just drawing scene after scene from his ass. eg the mc cant use skill because he has low sp- the writer would only mention that mc got low sp is near the ending. the writer never mentioned that sp attribute exist in 98 percent of the novel. when mc put points in sp only then he can use magic.

protagonist built a more than 50 meters high wall with width of 30 meters. and their attacking enemy is 3x their size. and protagonist instead of using their walls chose to fight outside the wall. these is frustratingly stupid of the writer

at midstage leaving aperture he had already spend more than 200 billion years cultivating. compare that to a normal leaving aperture that would cultivate less than 500 years. at leaving aperture he cultivate everyday where a day is multiplied by 10 million. multiply that by 60 years. thats only at leaving aperture level and his lower rank is not included in cultivation. that is typical of these kind of writing but the writer is realky lazy to di some math