Lennard_Awe

30d

Commented

More Details please the story feels very rushed, you could for example include the family dynamic in the Targaryens

ch 20 Quick vote

HOTD- Family above All

Book&Literature · Vencha

Lennard_Awe

2mth

Replied to Anonny_Anonymous

Let him write and if you have to criticise Anything do it in a constructive way instead of being toxic

ch 0 9 Travels VIII

Humanity Unchained

Book&Literature · Vincent_0580

Lennard_Awe

4mth

Posted

The book starts strong with a character that sets himself good and Strategic goals an de ends with him becoming a religious fanatic offerin his firstborns life to R'hollor to save his mother. I can't express the disgust I feel over that decision!!! Wouldn't recommend reading it!

GoT: Lucion Lannister, Kingslayer

Book&Literature · TheRagFromTheCrag2

Lennard_Awe

6mth

Commented

2

ch 0 3 Should there be a genderbending skill/ power in this fanfic?

Fate/Hentai System

Anime & Comics · HentaiGodZ

Lennard_Awe

6mth

Commented

Option 3 sounds the best

ch 28 vote

Reborn into Star Wars without a system

Movies · Wingzer0

Lennard_Awe

10mth

Posted

I'll be honest this is one of the best fanfictions/novels I've ever read. Not only is the author original with his plots and story but also manages to include a sense of lighthearteness an witiness that I sorely miss in many other storys on this platform. He also manages to keep his writing quality on a suberb level and doesn't drop in the middle. Lastly is the amount and continuity something rarely seen. Because of all this: props to the author

Elder Blood Witcher

Video Games · Niggross

Lennard_Awe

10mth

Commented

Cyberpunk as a failed Arasaka experiment

ch 20 I need ideas

Reborn In Chicago Fire

TV · HiTherefic

Lennard_Awe

1yr

Commented

Son of poseidon

ch 23 question for yall.

DC: Son of Themyscira

Anime & Comics · TrapcardD

Lennard_Awe

1yr

Commented

First of All I'd like to mention that I'm not trying to bemean you but to just give constructive criticism, now ONWARDS! 1.I liked it better in the old version of this Story when the main character didn't show his face. 2. I liked it better when James showed Shield that he is not to be messed with for example when He jammed the Scanners but despite that good Story and keep it up

ch 0 7 Chapter 1-redo