Rodyn_Sylvestre

As I read, I didn't get the feeling that everything was being rushed. What's more, the main character handles the situation very well, quickly finding a solution to a problem. Perhaps the first part on Earth should be longer, with a slower pace, to contrast with the rest of the story. That way, we can identify with the main character's experience. It's like Alice in Wonderland, when she falls down the hole and loses all her bearings, meets fantastic creatures and encounters dangers. In any case, it's an original way of doing things and you have my full support to keep it up!

(sorry in advance, english is not my native language) I've read the first 38 chapters. I really enjoyed the beginning of the story for the intelligence and honesty of the characters, the fact that there is a quid pro quo for power and use of the system, the mission to bring the deities back into the world, the grandiose battle scenes. However, I don't like the main character. He's interested in saving this other world to stay alive, he deliberately shows a brave attitude so that other people trust him, he's admired for his foolishness in the face of danger, and we don't know what he thinks about the presence of the gods. People just want him to lend them his strength without anything in return, and he regards them as NPCs, although he seems concerned about the two women who accompany him so that we, as readers, become attached to the characters. He's not a hero but still wants to act like one