Badges 15
Moments 16
First off really enjoy your writing, I love the way your characters are written. The only thing I would want to say is that I feel like there's a pacing or flow issue with the second story and the current one. The first one felt a little rushed to the finish, but then again he was just ridiculously powerful at that point so made sense. The second one just felt really fast from the point of them settling in Alaska, not saying it was bad just felt off I guess I would say. This one though I love the idea of the story but something about the setup just seems to scattered and all over the place. I say this all in the context of how I feel about it because I am by no means an expert on writing unless it's the Army style and they want us to write like 10yr olds so the officers can understand it. Anyways love your stuff already read them twice and even if you never rewrite them I'll still reread them in the future. Keep going and I hope you never lose the happiness writing brings you.
ch 75 Author Update
Reincarnated as an Archangel in the Omniverse
Anime & Comics · ManOfCultureLeon
why are they talking like Laverna is dead, she's just busy making a new body so she can decend again like all the gods do over and over again. there may be a delay of hundreds of years before they can return but they are immortal what does it matter
Ouranos listened to her words in silence before immediately responding in a heavy tone as he continued resisting the combined Divinities of the five opposite him, "That may be the case, but it stands that Laverna was killed, not by a god, but by the unlawful action of a mortal. He may not be personally responsible, but his actions led to her death without trial or judgment. It was not his right, nor place to-"
Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
Anime & Comics · Einlion
really enjoying the story
ch 312 Chapter 311
MC's not part of the story
Fantasy · pujimaki
"Let's say I owed a favor to someone. You almost got Paimon, but she thought you'd actually might make her Emergency Rations. She called me in, and well...here I am!", she giggled, "All I can say is...don't challenge her to an eating contest."
In HOTD with The Satou System
Anime & Comics · ManOfCultureLeon
Didn't the Fallen and Devils try peace but were beaten or murdered by the demons? I can see what your saying but the fact that they have so much of an advantage and kept slaughtering despite no one being a real threat to them makes them pretty vile. I can see it the way you are saying but only if you tone down the portrayal of the demons. Right now it kinda reads like they are a swarm of unkillable locusts sweeping the land to devour souls. Still love the story definitely not any kind of deal breaker on the enjoyment I'm getting reading this.
"I agree to the meeting.", Meliodas said, "Now save her."
Superman in the Multiverse (MHA, DC, and Marvel)
Anime & Comics · ManOfCultureLeon
you make a fair point but on the marvel power scale they may as well be normal humans
"Dangerous!?", Jean mocked, "I saw the people you were taking!! Is someone that can talk to animals dangerous!? Is someone that can see long distances dangerous!? Is someone who has super senses dangerous!?"
Superman in the Multiverse (MHA, DC, and Marvel)
Anime & Comics · ManOfCultureLeon
"Finally, now no more fucking around!!", I shouted hitting a turned Superman hard to erase him from existence, "Now you scumbags, whose next!"
Superman in the Multiverse (MHA, DC, and Marvel)
Anime & Comics · ManOfCultureLeon
"Dear...we may have done something bad.", his wife said.
Superman in the Multiverse (MHA, DC, and Marvel)
Anime & Comics · ManOfCultureLeon
Picking him up, he looked at me with genuine fear. It was at that point that his life flashed before his eyes, and he started wetting himself. Crying he called out for his mother to save him, but he remembered that he was the one that killed his parents.
Superman in the Multiverse (MHA, DC, and Marvel)
Anime & Comics · ManOfCultureLeon
"A Hero sometimes has to make the difficult choices that others won't. You have no issue ordering a nine year to be killed, but try to weasel your way out of karma for all your crimes. Tell me, whose soul do you think is purer yours or mine?", I asked, "How many people have you killed while they pleaded for their lives or for their family's lives? Don't bother answering, I read your mind already. You enjoy the rush of torturing people which disgusts me. I am not doing this for fun, this is a warning to any criminals in the future. Lay a finger on a single hair of my loved ones, and I will hunt you down to the ends of the Earth."
Superman in the Multiverse (MHA, DC, and Marvel)
Anime & Comics · ManOfCultureLeon
The shuttle was strapped onto a rocket and it was completely ready to be launched but we still needed to wait about 4 months. After all, if we go there too early then our trip will be completely wasted. Now, why the fuck the rocket looks like a giant dildo ready to pierce the heavens???
The Epic of Leviathan
Anime & Comics · InGlorious
Well if it continues like that I would probably read it as religiously as I do EPIC.
ch 2219 Not Really a Chapter
Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
Anime & Comics · Einlion
I feel that's slightly unfair, sure those things exist in Bleach but at no point are they discussed. We have context to understand the everyday things never explained in the manga, Vahn doesn't.
Bleach had been one of the few mangas Vahn had been allowed to read during his captivity so he always had a moderate amount of interest in obtaining his own Zanpakutou. They were weapons that were nourished by the Ego, taking a shape that best suited their wielder's combat style. Vahn had a keen interest in seeing what form his own Zanpakutou would take, so, with a sudden influx in his OP reserves, he decided to invest in the [Asauchi Production Method].
Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
Anime & Comics · Einlion
"Y-Yeah! FUCK IT!"
Epic of Vampire Dragon: Reborn As A Vampire Dragon With a System
Fantasy · PancakesWitch