losnxd

2yr

Posted

Full marks first 17 ch. sad that i found this one too early… not enough Chapters Yet Oh well, Keep writing author im gonna keep reading Dontmindmetexttoofill150characters

Hey, Why Are My Skills so Weird!?

Fantasy · Aidka

losnxd

2yr

Commented

Hate Novels with Plot armor

Thinking about it, these clothes are crazy expensive. Only someone like my mother can afford to make our entire wardrobe with this kind of clothes.

Hey, Why Are My Skills so Weird!?

Fantasy · Aidka

losnxd

2yr

Commented

Thank good there are believable reasons for him surviving So far🙏🙏

Thinking about it, these clothes are crazy expensive. Only someone like my mother can afford to make our entire wardrobe with this kind of clothes.

Hey, Why Are My Skills so Weird!?

Fantasy · Aidka

losnxd

2yr

Posted

Nothing new here, and what is there is lower quality the rest in average and riddled with gramatical errors Needs editing before im going back. Sorry but first 10 chap didnt catch me.

I Am The Anti-Mage

Fantasy · Phantomfiend

losnxd

2yr

Posted

uff, I don't know about this one guys. The premise of the story is refreshing, "vlogger goes to another world", but it just has so many problems. In the first tens of chapters, Universe-wide reaching stuff is being foreshadowed. MC gets super broken stuff very fast without any work at all (Items without grind, Killing intent without fighting more than 2 times) and characters super like mc after having met him once. Now I know that luck is a thing but this one just piles on and on. It kinda feels like that every good thing that can happen to an MC like: -luck, face slapping, having a random girl from school like him, new OP Girl randomly likes him, S Class ability for free, Legendary item for free, System for free, Killing intent for free... happens to this one. The Vlogging part also becomes basically a side part of the story 50 chapters in I fell. Writing Now, this much is not that much of a problem as the others, considering that the author is a non-native speaker, but anyways there are grammatical errors that will make you pause all over the novel. Man sorry for the rant, just had such a good premise...

Points Madness: For The Vlog!

Fantasy · YouthGod

losnxd

2yr

Commented

Legit fought 2 times???

After all the fighting and killing that he did all this time, a dangerous vibe was cultivated on him even though all he killed was just low level monsters, it still makes him able to release an aura like this.

Points Madness: For The Vlog!

Fantasy · YouthGod

losnxd

2yr

Replied to losnxd

Ok read legit 2 paragraphs down... On me guys

Then he continued, "That's not all, did you know that it was made using monster materials by none other than the best blacksmith right now, Ben Smith!"

Points Madness: For The Vlog!

Fantasy · YouthGod

losnxd

2yr

Commented

So you can sell random low lvl strengthening potion for 10k but the watch designed by the best designer and made by the best smith out of monster materials is only 100k?🤔

Then he continued, "That's not all, did you know that it was made using monster materials by none other than the best blacksmith right now, Ben Smith!"

Points Madness: For The Vlog!

Fantasy · YouthGod

losnxd

2yr

Commented

Idk about the pacing...

That post alone gathered 300 thousand likes and 200 thousand shares with over 1 million comments below it.

Points Madness: For The Vlog!

Fantasy · YouthGod

losnxd

2yr

Commented

Idk about this one author

As for what the conversation is about, that is for another chapter in the future, but all you need to know is that something big is happening, so big that it involves the whole World and the Universe even.

Points Madness: For The Vlog!

Fantasy · YouthGod

losnxd

2yr

Commented

Could Have ended it with saying kid is dead and squashed. Going Into detail in which direction his Squashed limbs Etc. are pointing is a bit much no🤔🤔

The limbs of the child are pointed in directions that it was not supposed to be able to do. The body of the child is thoroughly crushed, some bones are sticking out from his skin.

Points Madness: For The Vlog!

Fantasy · YouthGod

losnxd

2yr

Posted

This was like a good plane ride over The andes. all well flying at a steady height until you see the mountains coming closer fast. Man did this story crash in my opinion. everything going great, nothing exceptional, but steady improvement until a certain arc around chp. 400/500 i believe. Well until then was nice. do with this review what you will! :)

Birth of the Demonic Sword

Eastern · Eveofchaos

losnxd

2yr

Commented

Why darkness tho and not space aTtribbute?

'Warp spell, rank based on the mental level of the user, limited to darkness element. The user teleports at a distance depending on the quantity of mental energy used.'

Birth of the Demonic Sword

Eastern · Eveofchaos

losnxd

2yr

Posted

For me this setting had everYthing to make For aGreat Story, but the writing diDnt caTch me fast enough. give it a try To see for yourself, dont expect S+ tho

New Game+

Sci-fi · Rapture_Tales

losnxd

3yr

Commented

cmon if you enGlish is than bad our can still critizise .lol

Just like writing web novels. If the premise of the story is interesting, no reader will nitpick the author about using basic English.

I Am A Notorious Hidden Boss In The Alternate World

Urban · Pointbreak

losnxd

3yr

Replied to Matthew_Coley

i mean stupid tEenager dumb no?

It was ridiculous and naïve of him to have thought he could get his girlfriend to quit by smoking her cigarettes. Not only did he failed, but he also got himself addicted to smoking with her.

I Am A Notorious Hidden Boss In The Alternate World

Urban · Pointbreak

losnxd

3yr

Posted

think of the stupidest mc you can think of. Think of another one. Now multiply Them and you still only have 5% of the stupidity this mc has. Dont do it to yourself its not worth it.

Battle of Ascension

Fantasy · HotIce

losnxd

3yr

Posted

I really like this one, here are my thoughts why: - the writing starts off kinda poor but gets better with every chapter and Gets good fairly quickly - although the concept is not entirely new, Its in no way overused and the author ads his own fresh twist - no “cliche” yet as far as i can tell - story that keeps you coming for more i have finished all the chapters there are and i must say this us the Best New novel i’ve found in a while. now pls keep up the update schedule🙏