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You are right the MC not an antihero at all. I got confused and thought I was responding to a comment on My Vampire System, another novel from the same author and a chronological sequel to Level Up Zombie.

A few things: (1) There is a plot reason to why the location of the University is not mentioned until much later in the novel. (2) The mc is an antihero, the novel shows a beautiful character progression. (3) I agree that the free chapters are for peaking your interest, and from what you posted this one did. Your complaint was more that there was little revealed, and you could have used the 3 free unlocks you get daily to continue reading and later decide if you want to use coins. I'm going to give you an example of the first novel series I ever read, Harry Potter. When I started reading it was shortly before the 4th book was out. There was a lot of hype. I think none of the movies had been made yet, but there was hype about them already. I hated the first chapter I fell asleep about 3 times while reading it. Yet, I had bought the book and was curious about the hype, therefore I powered through. I started slightly liking the story maybe after the 5th chapter, and now I consider it a very well written and thought out story. I loved it.

The author does a very good job at world building, and you can see how much better he has gotten from his first book (the first was very good, it's just the new ones are better). That said, some details in the ending felt a bit anti-climatic. The explanation given to the actions of one of the pivotal side characters was a bit lackluster. Can't explain better without spoilers. All in all, I highly recommend this novel. I also recommend reading My Dragon System (Isekai as a human) followed by My Vampire System. Both are very good reads, and if you're observant you can see where the author decided to join them into the same universe.

The plot is very good and the storyline is great. However, the author repeats itself so much that half or more of the text could be removed without the story being affected in the slightest. Sometimes a paragraph is the same as the one before the previous but I'm a different order so that it relates to what was being said in the previous paragraph. Even worse sometimes a chapter is a retelling of the previous chapter with different words, and some added details. This is the reason for removing 3 stars from writing quality. I was tempted to remove 4 stars, but the actual storyline redeems it a bit.