Hey, It's already Been 3 weeks... you didn't stop writing did you?
ch 41 Master Roshi's Kamehameha Wave
Anime & Comics · Lightning
did he go 'yang'?
ch 15 Chapter 15
Anime & Comics · Dr_Chad
vro, Vegeta at saiyan saga Destroy earth? / this is A major plot-hole if The planet can be destroyed by D ranks? Well... its dropped
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Lol, I always See Authors Forget about mentioning Fūinjutsu, Why? It is The most Underrated and Almost God level Op in The right hands, He could Have had better Fūinjutsu Potential If he used To program and invent... bruh, If You are using it in the story then Ignore tis' Comment,
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Can You Give him Kaio-ken After Vegeta Arc? and Make A new technique, Kaio-ken Amplifies KI Exiting The body, The Body not used to it Gets Overworked and Overcharged, You could Have him learn from Kaio-ken 0.1 or something... lol And Make him Fight his inner Self, He Caused An accident Before Being reborn, He has to face himself and come to terms with himself, Like In Naruto Series, Goku Achieved Ultra instinct, i think there is a reason He reached It on his own, Some conditions? Moving Without thinking? Then why doesn't Animals Become Ultra Instinct? I think It Requires Purity, You have to reach The purest state in something, And I think Every Ultra Instinct is different, Because not every UI can Have KamehameHa, and Purity is Required because he is mortal, a god Is pure Of A Concept, Kai- Creation, Hakaishin- Destruction. Angel- The name defines Itself. A mortal Will require a Pure Something, Goku's was Pure Desire For Fighting Without killing, He valued Strength of His opponents, As Long As His opponents don't Live Solely without Killing, he Will Spare them. So make Him Able to Be Content with himself, And Maybe Make him Modify The 'Witchcraft' Later Shown in Dragon ball super , Or you can Add Something Closely related to FuinJutsu, Shadow and Light Style Should Exist There , Make a FuinJutsu 'Seal' For Sun and Moon, Gods Will Be shocked Seeing a Mortal Create Something out of Nothing From Sun and Moon Seal of Sage of Six paths, From The Concept of Light and Shadow, Make Truthseeking Orbs, Or Make Your Eyes Mangkyo Sharingan, You can Make The Susanoo Dense To Amplify It's Effects after Mastering it, It would Make Good Protection against People When They go SUPER SAIYAN , or F*ck with Beerus By Nullifying Hakai with Truthseekin Orbs, Long live Human, Maybe Make him precieve God Ki When Supreme Kai Appears? Then he Will go 'Human God' Form?
ch 41 Master Roshi's Kamehameha Wave
Anime & Comics · Lightning
Harem, Itself in Not bad, BUT it's Abused, Used, And Badly Written, They turn The Whole Story On that, They Reduce IQ of Characters and Disregard everything That is not related to Smut. That's The Reason I dislike Harem. Because It's badly written, I Still like The ones Who Can atleast Focus on something else, It's A total disappointment that they turn A Good Novel Into smut And Slowly/ Quickly turn It Into something That we search for On the internet for relieving purposes, we don't need that thing, we Can already Watch and Read Them On Certain Sites, They Don't Need To dirty And Kill our Brain Cells With all The poor World Building and Slowly Or Already Turning The MC Hateful and Lecherous Pervert... or they were already a Pervert, They have no Redeeming Qualities, That's why The Hate for Harem exists. We already have means to relieve Us, We Are not retarded to Expect it to be everywhere.
ch 0 1 Important Info + Fill
Anime & Comics · GhostyZ
--- Somewhere In a Faraway Land --- *Bzzt* *Bzzt* Universal Channel Personnel: Truck Kun Strikes Again... What Is Your Opinion Dear Guest? Reader: Yet Again We See The Overuse And Still Effective Troupe... I am Afraid It will Stay Like That Until Space Trucks Are Launched... -Camera Out-
ch 0 1 V1 Ch 1:The Machine
Fantasy · Commonnerfer
Well, Only True Fans know about that To be honest, and He couldn't Have remembered Those details When Years had passed Or Maybe It got stuck In the back of his mind...So he only had a Vague idea... Dragon Ball Before Z Is not Remembered by many.
ch 40 To Frypan Mountain!
Anime & Comics · Lightning
The Male Lead Is utter Sh** There is no Other Definition for him, Their Love and Feelings Are Definitely Forced and Designed by those So-called Gods. She Should have Kept calling her the empress, Because That's who she is, If she was So Powerless Then She Didn't Deserve to be there... This Whole world Should Be destroyed by a Destroyer God, Along with those Incompetent Gods.
ch 0 6 Chapter 6: It Starts Here
History · Calistal
WTF. Man Mil-Tan Is More Famous Than Most Anime Characters in the anime. All and Every Anime fan Knows about Mil-Tan, That Sh*t is way too 'Famous'(Not in the good way, May The Poor bast*rds who laid their eyes on that Person Rest in peace) I am glad that Person Is Not Real, Or i Would have Filed an FIR As soon as I saw that person, Even if i Falsely Claimed that he/she was following a Little Girl with a lollipop, They would Arrest Him , Even if it's Illegal Without Arrest warrant...
ch 38 So long Oolong
Anime & Comics · Lightning
... keep the Chapters Coming and i Will Let the Stones Dropping.....
ch 38 So long Oolong
Anime & Comics · Lightning
you saw that Mentality of MC 'Changed' and He was fine Way too well being a girl,I was getting Frustrated Reading this, Because This MC has no pride? I somehow Don't want to read it, Its uncomfortable to read, Because That devil Only Seems like A total Gold digger , MC is a hero, so why not? MC is Clumsy and I think Sometimes It was Mentioned that he Couldn't 'refuse' ? Why is there no explanation of devils and its abilities? I just wanted to kill that devil, MC is being Manipulated, if not, This author Is a sadist and This Novel is not for us
Reincarnated as a Hero- and the Wrong Gender?!
Fantasy · Rebuilt_Kitsunii