It had a couple problems; the dates were wrong, the family drama played out too quickly, power was handed to the mc too quickly and without him doing anything, and a couple other inconsistencies
They had nothing to worry about. They knew that he would be safe and looked after, spoiled even. That was much better than the treatment most Squibs received, and what was Hadrian if not a supposed Squib?
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He won't be a lowkey mc, he'll gain a reputation just like in the original HB:TAP
They had nothing to worry about. They knew that he would be safe and looked after, spoiled even. That was much better than the treatment most Squibs received, and what was Hadrian if not a supposed Squib?
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I'm rewriting it, it's already up lol.
ch 49 warning: bad and good news
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Yes, it's a misdirection, he has magic.
They had nothing to worry about. They knew that he would be safe and looked after, spoiled even. That was much better than the treatment most Squibs received, and what was Hadrian if not a supposed Squib?
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One last chapter left and that will conclude the buildup to his abandonment. Consider it the prologue, lol. However, the pacing will still be slower than the original.
ch 0 7 Hadrian Charlus Black
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No Hermione
ch 0 6 Dorea's Plan
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Thanks, I'm glad you agree. The other had far too many holes and rapid pacing.
ch 0 6 Dorea's Plan
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No, but he will use dark magic and do things that people do not approve of
ch 0 6 Dorea's Plan
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There's no sister in this one, it was one of the things I changed during rewrite, no need to worry lol.
ch 0 5 A Nightly Visit
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The story is an AU fic (alternate universe), which is why it has all the added elements it will feature in the future. Hadrian is just an alternate version of Harry, which is why there are so many differences and similarities between them. The other questions simply boil down to plot, and the way I wanted the characters to interact and the story to pan out.
ch 0 5 A Nightly Visit
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He could, but Charlus doesn't hate James, he's immensely disappointed in him
ch 0 4 The Prophecy
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No harem
ch 0 1 The Wrong Boy-Who-Lived
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I’ll try not to
Soon, finally healed - just catching up on uni work i missed now
Hadrian Black : The Abandoned Prodigy [REWRITE!] 你好,我的名字
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