Zentamental

5d

Commented

You gotta respect it

"Staying up this late just to beat a stranger's ass..."

Murim's Masked Hunter

Fantasy · _bobo_1

Zentamental

7mth

Posted

This story isn't for anyone who is into reading wholesome romance novels. The main character is kind of a gaslight, gatekeep, girlboss who steals other people's girls. He got that NTR rizz

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Fantasy · nemolikessoju

Zentamental

7mth

Commented

He finna NTR everyone in every world. He's like the Thanos of NTR

ch 24 TRAVEL TO NEW WORLD

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Fantasy · nemolikessoju

Zentamental

7mth

Commented

NTR is still NTR. No matter how hard or how soft

But sometimes, there is soft NTR where the pair aren't together yet and a third person comes in, intervening and stealing the girl/boy's body and virginity before they can get together.

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Fantasy · nemolikessoju

Zentamental

7mth

Commented

"But still, if it was me—"

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Fantasy · nemolikessoju

Zentamental

7mth

Commented

He into older women? He just like me frfr

He's fucking these taken ladies while at the same time having a fiancée who he is supposed to marry next year.

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Fantasy · nemolikessoju

Zentamental

7mth

Commented

What an obsessive boyfriend. Can't go a few hours without calling his girlfriend. Does he have no trust in her loyalty? Surely she has a reason to be working late and not picking up your calls.

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Fantasy · nemolikessoju

Zentamental

7mth

Commented

Stealing another person's girl is wildddd. Bro got that NTR razz

I learned during sex that her name was "Felicia" and she was still together with her boyfriend which made the intercourse ten times better. It was one thing to have sex with a girl, it was another to have sex with a girl whose boyfriend is unaware of what's going on when she's at work.

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Fantasy · nemolikessoju

Zentamental

7mth

Commented

Being able to see other people's lives is kind of OP in the real world.

ch 0 2 SISTER'S TRAP

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Fantasy · nemolikessoju

Zentamental

7mth

Commented

Bro getting thirsty while writing? Is he writing with his mouth?

So I pressed a button on my bed and — hold up, let me get a glass of water real quick. I'm getting thirsty. I've been narrating nonstop. You think I rested between chapters but I didn't.

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Fantasy · nemolikessoju

Zentamental

7mth

Commented

Emotional damage

"Oh oh! Did Greg finally ask you out on a date?"

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Fantasy · nemolikessoju

Zentamental

7mth

Commented

OUCH!

"Did you get that scholarship you applied for last month?"

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Fantasy · nemolikessoju

Zentamental

7mth

Commented

Ouch

"Something good? What? Wait, don't tell me. Let me guess. Did you finally get the top score on the exam?"

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Fantasy · nemolikessoju

Zentamental

7mth

Commented

Is this a double entendre? Because you know... the vajajay also smells like fish sometimes

That's why I need to taste the fish before it can escape the pond where I have easy access to her.

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Fantasy · nemolikessoju

Zentamental

7mth

Commented

Here from your other novel

ch 0 1 EMOTIONAL MANIPULATION

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Fantasy · nemolikessoju

Zentamental

7mth

Commented

Bro thinks he's in a K-drama

Running down the stairs and out of the building, I purposely stopped just before I reached my car. I stood for a while, letting my body soak in the rain which was honestly the perfect weather for the mood I was hoping to achieve.

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Fantasy · nemolikessoju

Zentamental

7mth

Commented

Why you so obsessed with me?

"It's an obsession. You're obsessed with me because I'm something that you can't have. You've always had your way so now that this is the first time that isn't the case... you're obsessed with wanting to have it because it's in your nature to do so," she said as she pulled her hand away from my heart.

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Fantasy · nemolikessoju

Zentamental

3yr

Posted

This is a pretty generic story with a generic plot, generic characters. That doesn't make it bad but it's so bland that I would sometimes much rather have a pile of mess that will at least make me chuckle at the atrocity.

Closed Beta That Only I Played

Fantasy · basso77

Zentamental

3yr

Posted

Currently at chapter 19. Here's my thoughts so far. It's dwelling into the psyche of someone who has returned from the future. Although he understands his flaws and deems that he needs friends, in his mind... he only sees them as equipment to strengthen his power. He doesn't judge people by their character when befriending them but rather their value or because of a whim. However, character does matter to him when it comes to the other side of the spectrum. Without mercy, he was willing to take the life of a villain from the future that took the life of thousands. Is he a hypocrite because he deems that he can change in his second try in life and yet he didn't want to give the villain a change? Yes. However, that's what makes him human.