andrea_calvaruso - Profile

the plot from the meeting between thrae's leaders and dracula has become unreadable: 1) I understand the harem but this is too much, the women seem totally devoid of any intellect, 2) that humans are already rooting for an alien leader who until a short time ago he could invade the entire planet is ridiculous, 3) Dracula's behavior seems like that of a psychotic just released from a mental hospital, how he could appear even just by imagining him to be a leader to be respected is inconceivable. I understand the wish-fulfillment but this it's too much even for the most open and tolerant minds.

blah, blah, blah, good premise, not so good development.

The World building is interesting. The problem is that the characters are stupid and make senseless choices. this problem only gets worse in the story.

The story of the first 60-70 chapters was pretty good. Perhaps the protagonist is too emotional. But still it was quite acceptable. But this harem thing pretty much ruined the whole story, you fucked it up. the rest went into the background and basically became shit.

Exccellent. Good story and an intresting characters. i love it. i think is almost perfect. i hope to see the updates coming soon. 10 👏👏👏