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I really enjoyed this book up until the point where he had three main bodies and was doing a whole mess of random stuff that required one body to do one thing and his main body to do something else and his third body to do something else while all the other clones of the clone bodies were off who knows where. At a certain point (namely about 1100 chapters in) it is just too much.

It always feels like a cheap way to let the author write side stories and often let the mc avoid tough situations by only having the clone involved. Either way, not my cup of tea, just don’t like it lol

Great Story! HOWEVER, Avatar/Clone Technique = I’m Out. Always so annoying.

This was a wonderful book until the children. The fact that we are so far into the book and Long Yang is still so out of control, and everyone who knows Weiwei was willing to lie to her about her own child just absolutely ruined this book. It just overturned all the relationship and character development up till then.

The free chapters had perfect grammar and were written well… Once you have to pay the quality goes to h*ll in a handbasket.

The ML just ruins the book. I can’t explain it any other way.

Can someone explain how the ML raping her in chapter 2 is just fine? Like how do people like this kind of story?

Well written, for sure, and a well thought out system of magic, but it started to become way too science-fundamentalist anti-religion. It feels like the author began to add more and more of their own bias into the book along the way and it just became somewhat tiring.

I definitely enjoy this story, however, I have stopped reading it. The cost of the chapters is very high for their length and the author adds unnecessary advertising at the end of each chapter that pads the word count. 9 tokens a chapter for such short chapters feels like a ripoff. The cute baby talk spelling gets tiring at some point as well.

One of, if not the, best stories on Webnovel.

This book is well written, interesting content, but I find the main character to be too apathetic and the attitude towards death and killing is very casual. Killing an entire race of people because of an organization led by members of their race seems to be a bit overboard… (just one example). The mc has a level of apathy that doesn’t lend itself well to adding other characters to the story, and leads to a somewhat 2 dimensional and bland character. It feels impersonal, somewhat depressing, and unlike many other stories there is nothing about the mc that makes me want him to succeed.

This Story Is Amazing, I Love The Pace Of The Novel And The Depth Of The Characters And Worlds. Author, PLEASE Have Khan Stay Faithful to Liica, I Think Him Having That Drive To Return To Her Is An Important Part Of His Character.