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2yr
Commented This is missing a comma
Internally he felt this situation wasn't good. No one was coming to look for his trouble how was he going to receive future compensations.
The Bloodline System
Fantasy · TimVic
2yr
Replied to the_Harlequin It just feels somewhat unrealistic for a character to be this stupid. It's like this character is straight out of a wuxia novel.
"Monster! You're a monster! You have killed Paul!"
The Bloodline System
Fantasy · TimVic
Grammar and sentence structure is absolutely attrocious. So many run on sentences, capitalizing words after commas, etc. It is clear this person doesnt know how to speak english.
The Tale of the Void Emperor
Fantasy · LivingVoid