I'm just your average eldritch abomination coming to consume everything, even reality itself. Cheers.
2019-09-01 Joined France
please don't drop this novel. it's great, it really is.
ch 72 Sato's Advice
Fantasy · Sir_Killington
I will, Ashen one.
It's cool to see characters having believable reactions. Good writting. Masterpiece compared to most book on webnovel.
ch 2328 Survivor’s Guilt (Part 2)
Fantasy · Legion20
so it basically is dark soul
In the case of the Sky Bright Daoist's trials though, it seemed to not focus on cultivation at all. Rather, it was mostly focused on mentality and willpower instead. Lin Wu was sure that if he had to do so many attempts, he would have long since given up.
Eastern · Grand_Void_Daoist
The Tower walks ! just like Numidium, were the dwemer on Morgar ?
ch 2298 Fated Meeting (Part 2)
Fantasy · Legion20
My opinion so far Your writing is very good. Better that 99% of the books on webnovel. You know how to create tension I think however that it would be nice to have some "relaxed" chapter with character bonding / world building. It's important to let the tension drop a bit from time to time so the next stressful moment can be more impactful.
ch 53 Kamida's Aid
Fantasy · Sir_Killington
Thank you for the chapter. My opinion so far : - Your writing is good, but be wary of repetitions - You should try to focus your story a bit more : I understand that Noah is an average dude, and his first combat was very difficult. But tbh the story is a bit slow to start. That's ok because it obviously is not your average fantasy novel, but 8 chapter to deal with a couple of monsters seems a bit long. - Kudos for exploring the classical lovecraftian themes of cursed inheritance and hidden horrors beyond our understanding. Can't wait for the next chapter and see what his eldritch body refinement did ! He should get tentacles. Tentacles are very useful, and girls love 'em.
ch 0 8 A Perfect Attack
Urban · JaysAwake
as always, good job ! and thanks for the chapter
ch 514 Dragging Tail
Fantasy · Mike_Kochis
if you don't want to start a debate, don't insult people. because comparing me and my colleagues to slavers is insulting. My job is to help people free themselves from restraints imposed my mental illness. Not enslave them.
The second floor hosted just a few living quarters that belonged to the criminals that had been "promoted" from the scum of Mogar to loyal soldiers via various forms of torture and manipulation.
Fantasy · Legion20
See this! I just gifted the story: Dragon
ch 506 A Short Ride
Fantasy · Mike_Kochis
I love your work. just sayin' one year of writing the same story is hard, and thank you for going this far. i didn't have some much "fun" reading a web novel since Worm and Pact. Definitely one of the best work on this website. is there a discord somewhere for your novel ? anyway, thanks
ch 505 Bleary Eyes, Bad Decisions
Fantasy · Mike_Kochis
The Slaughterhouse 9 transmigrated ?
Yet the worst part was the carnival rides. They were the results of the bodies of the citizens fused with Body Sculpting and turned into living carousels that emitted agonized moans instead of music.
Fantasy · Legion20
I'm getting strong morrowind vibes from this novel. Very nice work !
ch 12 Black Leather.
Fantasy · AxlSLL
I like your story, it's fun. But you need someone to correct your mistakes, like "Weapon of mass distraction".
ch 98 Argument About Nukes
Fantasy · MaxwellKHA
Go for the balls. They deserve a Darwin Award.
ch 273 I Apologize! Maybe I Went A Bit Too Far, Fellow Cultivators
Fantasy · PancakesWitch
Monetization on webnovel is... something else. But tbh, I don't feel cheated when I pay for your chapters, so it doesn't bother me. If it's exposure you're after, you made the good choice since it's logical that webnovel will push novels they can actually make money from.
ch 72 Sato's Advice
Heroes to Hunted
Fantasy · Sir_Killington