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Moments 45
This whole chapter doesn’t progress the plot at all. Mom’s debt is high cause the cost is insanely high, and we are broke, btw 100 of the previous coin makes the next coin. Congratulations you understand basic math.
ch 31 Currency
I Can Create Monsters And Customize Them
Fantasy · MadScythe
It’s literally just been “I love my brother” “I’m integrating into this society” “wow I’m jacked from body weight training and eating mystery meat”
ch 18 Transformation
I Can Create Monsters And Customize Them
Fantasy · MadScythe
It is not “had” it needs to be “can”
Killing the monster - this was the second way, but the killing had to happen in a 1 vs 1 battle, no one had to help the person, and no one had to be around, otherwise, the monster's initial gene would destabilize, and would not be able to awaken the Evolution Tree in the person.
Endless Evolution: Last Star
Fantasy · Arlemit
“Infinite Power” is a “common ability”
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Awakening: I have a Game Panel with Recovery(unique)
Sci-fi · MountainDuskwalker
“How much do you want the AI to write” “Yes”
ch 0 3 Chapter 2
DXD: As a OC Primordial
Anime & Comics · Usernamemustbe3_18
Bruh how many chapters is this fight going to be
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Did he ever workout? The last chapter had him open the box with the book that took him 10 days to read. We never received confirmation on his exercise or progress on his "Get Stronger" quest that came out of nowhere.
ch 0 7 Status Menu
Rebirth Of The Strongest Worldsmith
Fantasy · WriterTheos
Isn't this kid 4/5 and has no background of exercise? How is he going to run the equivalent of 6.3 Miles in a day? Additionally the workout makes no sense for a person that young. It's just a copy paste of all the other similar novels that are an easy write off to give a kid a jump in power since you handed him advanced cognition for no reason.
ch 0 6 The Creation System
Rebirth Of The Strongest Worldsmith
Fantasy · WriterTheos
You are about 100 years off with your slavery dates in America.
He had been purchased and raised by them only to perform their duties for them. Of course, this wasn't completely uncommon in those old days, but Zero still had no clue that such a thing could be real.
Rebirth Of The Strongest Worldsmith
Fantasy · WriterTheos
Edit* It’s the peacock mantis shrimp.
Also, share your suggestions for abilities. Don't just limit yourselves to Uchiha and such; you can also draw inspiration from animal physiology.
Naruto: Self-Evolution
Anime & Comics · SharonMeuToba
Eyes of the mantis shrimp. Humans can process three channels of colour (red, green and blue), while mantis shrimps perceive the world through 12 channels of colour, and can detect UV (ultra violet) and polarised light, aspects of light humans can't access with the naked eye. The other 9 channels could be used for other abilities that are common, ex. Reaction time, supernatural vision encompassing a large field of view, etc. Plus the look cool/creepy.
Also, share your suggestions for abilities. Don't just limit yourselves to Uchiha and such; you can also draw inspiration from animal physiology.
Naruto: Self-Evolution
Anime & Comics · SharonMeuToba
Toilet pit?
Suddenly a feeling of nausea welled up in his heart, and Nash immediately ran to the toilet, retching towards the toilet pit for a long time, but he couldn't vomit anything except gastric juice. Just when Nash decided to call the emergency number, he suddenly felt all the bones in his body tremble.
Marvel : The Bloodline Emphasis
Anime & Comics · Void_06
Lord Tywin Lannister, is bald has bushy golden side whiskers and pale green eyes flecked with gold, surprisingly fit for his age, and is just sitting there menacingly, he looks at me and gives a light nod without breaking eye contact, and I know I can turn him into a meatball but his presence is just threatening, I don't know, I feel uncomfortable, I return the nod.
a game of thrones and magic
TV · Daoist611904
Their*
God:" Yes there is an infinite number of universes, to answer your second question there souls are cleansed getting rid of all their memories before they are reincarnated in the same universe."
Enjoying life in twilight
Movies · DarknessAuthor
Never reviewed a book before, this one got enough on my nerves that it prompted me to write one. The first 18 chapters are all repetitive and could be summarized into 3-4 instead of expounding upon regular day repetitive things. BUT LET ME get to the main point. This is just a knockoff version of Monster Paradise (written by - Nucler Warhead Cooked in Wine), little bro for little sis, similar first monster card, same “system comments,” same first exam type (desert survival), same first friend (fatty), it’s pretty much all just a worse re-write of a book I loved.
I Can Create Monsters And Customize Them
Fantasy · MadScythe