Shorten the paragraphs plz 😭
The young-man decided to eat inside of the restaurant, wanting unlimited refills on his Baja blast. Not realizing how much time had passed( I was busy watching Instagram Reels on my phone.) The young man looked at a clock on the wall(My phone) and saw that it was already 8:40pm. It had been 3 ish hours since he had gotten off work, and he decided to go home. Now, due to a series of "Coincidences" The young-man had not checked the weather app that day, nor did any of the workers at taco bell, leaving them unknowing of the approaching hurricane, of course, if he had known he would have used it as an excuse to not show up for work(No! I would never do such a thing!....Nah I would). Now, the first 5 minutes of the young-mans drive home hardly anything notable happened, he merged onto the freeway, exited off, saw a waffle house open for business, the usual drive home, after he got onto the road that would take him back to the house, the wind and rain picked up to an horrific extent, the young-man panicked and he sped up trying to get home as fast as possible, which led to his or rather my current situation.
Anime & Comics · Johnathan_Banks
The echo was summoned for hours? Don’t echos drain a lot of essence.
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Big Raga the opp stoppa
'I hope it's not Sukuna or Mahoraga.'
Anime & Comics · MaliciousPrince
This is just a demon lords hero from fanfiction.net it’s not dxd:teacher. I doubt your the original author as he hasn’t updated his account since 2020 so at least give credit instead of making it sound like it was inspired by your previous fanfic when your chapter are word for word the same.
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Flying raijin requires a lot of chakra
After creating a lot more seals than his quota required, Minato was given the opportunity by Konoha to learn a jutsu from the chunin library. Due to his low chakra reserves, Minato was drawn to Fuinjutsu, and he learned the technique of applying seals on chakra conductive surfaces with just his chakra.
Anime & Comics · DesMark
When did it say they were forced. Naruto failed early graduation multiple times he graduated in time with everybody else. Most people graduate at 12 and Naruto graduated at 12. It’s never been 16
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Anime & Comics · KK9494
Isn’t the reason the eight gates destroy the body because the chakra released from the gates is to overbearing and that’s why it’s important the body. There isn’t a lack of chakra when you open the gates there’s an excess.
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Anime & Comics · KK9494
He can use fire and lightning release
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Anime & Comics · KK9494
They did it in the anime but yeah it’s kinda dumb
I nod to myself. It shouldn't be too hard to convince my parents. They're kind people, almost painfully so.
Anime & Comics · Ventus889
Lol I thought that too but maybe the height standards are different due to quirks.
Flopping onto the bar stool at the kitchen island, Maru begun his horrid tale of missing noodles, immortal chefs and the meaning of life. Ran faced her son as she listened and couldn't help but puff her chest out at what a cutie he turned out to be. Around 168cm (5ft 5in.) tall, Maru was on the taller side for his age group. His facial features were smooth and still slightly rounded due to his age. For a child raised in the snowy mountain, his skin was far from pale. The healthy tone of his skin with a hint of pink on his cheeks often tempted her to pinch his cheeks. Something he always tried to wiggle away from. What made it impossible for him to completely blend in the crowd was his silver white hair matched with his slate grey eyes that bordered on blue. It was a mix of her and her husbands eye color, but the hair was all her. Something she sometimes bragged about. The soft locks were often messily held in a small bun, just barely. It was a wonder how such soft tresses were always in such a chaotic mess. How could such soft hair never be so hard to hold back (and stay back) without copious amounts of gel. She had tried. Both him and his father kept their hair long, despite his being a rich caramel brown. Something fairly common in winter regions.
Anime & Comics · RujiroTaicho
+1
-Stronk(Rin Tohsaka levels of maximum no chill)
Anime & Comics · NonToxicRespondent
Aizen has the hogyokyu which makes him constantly evolve and immortal and that’s why Ichigo used the final Getsuga Tensho because he thought he could kill Aizen before he evolved even further and reached a higher level of transcendence and surpassed ichigos current level of power.
(AN: So yeah, those who read the manga until the end or got spoiled might already guess what kind of training Gojo will receive. Hehe. It will be interesting. Finally, the next chapter will be a fight. Let's hope I write a good one. Honestly, Ikkaku power is something that makes no sense in bleach. Well, I can say the same for the whole Soul Society arc. The level shinigami showed during and after the Soul Society arc was completely different. So much that it confused the hell out of me. Of course, some got explanations, like how Zaraki was unconsciously holding back, etc. But how the hell does someone who mastered Bankai like Ikkaku nearly got killed by an Ichigo who didn't even learn Getsuga tensho when they first fought?)
Anime & Comics · HIKARU_GENJI
Coat
What Gender do you want the Neman Lion to be:
Anime & Comics · _Unknown_Being_
Rewrite
WRITE A FRESH NEW ONE WITH FEWER MISTAKES FROM THE EXP I GAINED TILL NOW.
Anime & Comics · whitedevil
+1
Indra is 4X maou level while sirzechs i true devil and akuja are 10X maou level
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Anime & Comics · OmniverseDivine
In the light novel it states sirzechs and akuja are stronger than indra
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Anime & Comics · OmniverseDivine
The heroic factIon would make the most sense
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Anime & Comics · Twin_Star_12
It doesn’t matter if it’s Chinese it matters about the translator and this one as he said himself is lazy af
After Returning, I Trained the Woman Who Bullied Me.
Others · 4Eyes