Yes
ch 181 Motionless Hog
Fantasy · Kiwidraken
Dam, again? This is getting a little mebarassing :|
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Fantasy · Kiwidraken
Yup, you’re observant and right about that 👍🏻
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Fantasy · Kiwidraken
Good point. Talia is just built different after hard physical labor, brawling with the other people in town, and Gerhart and Ritzy. But the knights are mobs, so I didn't put that much thought into them while Talia is a main character. Of course she's better. That's not plot armor. That's being a character worthy of being a central part in the story.
ch 0 9 Saving Gerry
Fantasy · Kiwidraken
I get what you're coming from and you make a strong point, so I agree with you. But I also think it might work the other way as well now that I'm more actively trying to up the pace. I'll cram things together to write shorter chapters, which will increase the pace, or at least keep it relevant. But I have a feeling that a combination will be best. I'll write long chapters when necessary and short chapters when that works. Best of both worlds :)
ch 74 Taking The Lead
Fantasy · Kiwidraken
Uh, yeah.... I forgot to upload it :|
ch 31 Saving Talia
Fantasy · Kiwidraken
It's not impossible, but I won't make any promises :/
ch 508 Spoiled Princess
Fantasy · Kiwidraken
thanks, for pointing that out :) I don't even know how I missed it :|
ch 0 1 Technically Successful Summoning
Fantasy · Kiwidraken
Thanks! Yeah, a fe hundred chapters earlier :D
ch 113 Change Of Plans
Fantasy · Kiwidraken
Yeah, I'm on fire 🔥 :D
ch 503 Red Hook Focusing
Fantasy · Kiwidraken
Probably never
ch 181 Motionless Hog
Hell Restoration Project
Fantasy · Kiwidraken