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honestly, when I wrote it I thought you wouldn't even read it :v I just wrote the review to get the anger out of my system :') but yeah that was my opinion, keep writing and keep improving author :D

Read to chapter 57 (Serious Review): World Background (4stars) because it's fan-fiction...The writing Quality (4stars) is good but not the best I've seen but good, And the updates are frequent (5 stars) on that one, (3Stars) for Story development it's not bad but no great either, and for the grand finale and the rant I have been holding on for weeks (1STAR) FOR Character Design I would have given him (0Stars) if I could!! So MC is too much of a pussy getting suppressed left and right sometimes being powerful and other times not (that's how it felt to me at least) it felt like the author is trying to suppress his strength development as to not make him op but just fails miserably making him appear useless and just keeps acting like a kid, and he is too indecisive for my taste So I know the author wants to make it seem logical and act like real human beings but honestly, I am not here to read logical and real stuff am here to enjoy what little time I have to entertain my self I don't give a shit how real or logical it appears, that's why a lot of people like Chinese protags because they are not that annoying to read it gives you a sense of excitement and they are mostly decisive and act illogical even though you know they shouldn't act like that BUT people still read them As I said this is a novel...its fantasy...its purpose is to entertain...but what do I know this is your book and you are free to write it as you like some people may like this style...but I don't, those are just my though take from them what you want (if any) and improve yourself as to become a better writer Peace!