John_Whitley - Profile

The Mc is great. The only things that get me are horrible grammar and how badly his magic affects his personality. I can't understand wanting power for the future, but he is too emo. Why did he join a guild if he was only going to train and not really interact with the guild?.

Why is it that every werewolf story is a multi personality crisis- super dark background story? While this is a great story. can't someone write about enjoying wolfdom?

The entire primosus of the story is fairly... ok more than fairly unique. a emersive game that not only affects the mc but everyone, granted him more so.. and a game without lvl stats but still extremely interesting.i hope more ppl will read and give stones and gifts to the author so he has to give us more and more. I want to bring the author to his/her knees, begging us to em rest. lol

So far I have to give this a good rating. the game seams realistic but not overly so. My only complaint is just mine. I do not like overly optimistic Mcs. So long as the story progress, and the mc gets a little more down to earth, like when selling the dagger in ch3. I will spend a lot of time keeping track of this story.

this is probably the best review for this story. I agree with everything stated. the only thing I might disagree with is update rate. at least for me is a little on the slow side; but wit the rate increase and length of chapters it is getting better. please take in consideration that this is coming from someone who reads as much as possible... pretty much as long as I don't have to focus on any one thing I am reading.