Webnovel Author: Zenos_Maxima2611 - Fanfic&Novel Collection

it was a stupid move for Bruce to make, using Liquified Red Krypton Stone which could be a double-edged weapon.

Really.... I wonder why the author still uses "most" of the original Spiderman plot... with Peter's presence, this could be minimized...

My head

man, I don't understand his obsession with sera... this grosses me out and cringes.

Serious? stockings? guys, even me who has done gacha FGO got better than MC...

It's too fast...

I hope Jean becomes mc second girlfriend... I don't want that girl to end up with Scott. Also, I think Sara's placement here is quite bad. there are many girls who might be the same age as your MC, but you pair your MC with your OC?.

i found that this novel was better than many other dxd novels, so i demanded MORE!.

geez... aren't you just generalizing otaku like your MC, author? that's bad, not all otaku are like that.

Eh... seems like your MC's ambitions are a bit low... doesn't want to be king until he dies or something?

and finally there will be war again between Edric and Daenerys, Edric's desire is peace and unity of Westeros, while Daenerys wants to take the throne that Edric occupies. These two desires cannot be united, unless you take a middle path such as marriage or at worst killing Daenerys. But in the end the flying reptiles will be angry because their "mama" was killed by Edric.

I was just commenting about the MC wanting to bring the Targaryens back to Westeros, using common sense Daenerys would definitely reject it. And plot armor here, only the author can apply it, not me as a reader. Well, for example... making all the MC's subjects agree without any resistance, making all the stories more favorable to the MC and making all his opponents weak in front of the MC. it includes plot armor.