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fiery aura? or fury?
With his usual cold face, Alex ascended the stairs confidently. Opposite him was a tall girl with a burly build. Her hands were thick and tan, unlike other girls, which mostly slender white. Standing there, the woman seems enveloped by an aura of fiery.
Time Space User System
Fantasy · Billy_Castellanos
its good to hear this. not even joking. as someone who writes stories, im always worried about how things are gonna happen. so seeing you say this about something im assuming a lot of people thought, helps with that.
Glancing at a nodding Bowser, Jack passed on the directions. 'Head to the right and follow the passage until Bowser says otherwise.'
The Achievement Junkie
Games · TheSilverQuill
doesn't this imply someone with wind aptitude has infinite mana in any form of wind? going on with that thought, does this work artificially? going on again, is it possible to have the wind aptitude and make a fan blow wind at you, then use the infinite mana from that wind to move the fan Infinitely, therefore creating an bottomless supply of mana for wind spells. same with light, could I strap a solar charge flashlight on my back and have infinite mana from it if I have the light aptitude?
Ordos smirked and retracted his spear and his tail. His tail dispersed into sand and as he walked over the trail of sand, he seemed to absorb it into his feet. Maybe he's like me. If he's in an area full of sand or… a desert, he would probably have an infinite source of mana as well.
Assassin's Concentration In Another World
Fantasy · MonarchX
nice touch to change the cliché a bit
Her voice was so elegant and soft. For some reason, I felt enchanted, but I easily shrugged it off. However, looks like some others weren't able to resist it. She must be an angel or something if she could do that. Oh, and her rank, she's actually ranked pretty high. There are a total of 6 ranks, from weakest to strongest they are copper, bronze, silver, gold, platinum, and diamond. What? You were expecting S-rank or something like that? Well, I did hope for it, but sadly those are only ranked for monsters.
Assassin's Concentration In Another World
Fantasy · MonarchX
I cant not hear typhon DeLeon from borderlands three for this guy, and I hate it cause I hate typhon's speech pattern
"Well then Seiya, it's good to have you onboard."
Assassin's Concentration In Another World
Fantasy · MonarchX
ylthat was on his shoes. it is a common character trait of hermes.
"I might be--"
My Hermes System
Fantasy · Romeru
I doubt the author will be as cringey as what I'm about to say. but does this mean mc is a god?
"Those words now define who you are, and who you will be in the coming years. You are your System, and the System is you. It is not just some power you hold, it is your identity!", the voice of the Headmaster started to become fuller and more passionate.
My Hermes System
Fantasy · Romeru
you know. I'm picky about what I read, and its refreshing to read something where the mc doesn't hate everyone for no reason. im enjoying his innocent personality, even if i do perfer a more bad guy vibe. so good job on that, and from a wannabe author to a true author. good luck.
...Was the guard… going to hit him with the hilt of his sword again?
My Hermes System
Fantasy · Romeru
oh yeah, its proven that once the sound barrier is broken sound is effected in different ways. but I believe there isn't a thing on earth that can break the sound barrier without a Shockwave.
1 flying knife appeared between his fingers as Leo threw it towards the northwest of his position. The flying knife was thrown at a fast speed that was comparable to Mach 1. It didn't produce a sonic boom since it was small or probably hard to notice.
Leveling System in Apocalypse World
Action · PBOM2004
it is 1 year for day and night. and thank you for clarifying that little bit.
"You really don't know where we are, do you?" Ian replied, "This Planet spin cycle last an entire year and right now, we are only six months in. I'm afraid we won't be seeing light for a very long time. but if you want to wait six months, you go ahead."
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
not necessarily, it all depends on where it is in its solar system. and by the sounds of it, the year thing was a reference to earth time to make it easier to understand. I cant explain it myself, but i think 1 day on this planet equals a year on earth.
"You really don't know where we are, do you?" Ian replied, "This Planet spin cycle last an entire year and right now, we are only six months in. I'm afraid we won't be seeing light for a very long time. but if you want to wait six months, you go ahead."
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
im pretty sure anything flying fast enough to break the sound barrier will make a Shockwave, but I may be wrong.
1 flying knife appeared between his fingers as Leo threw it towards the northwest of his position. The flying knife was thrown at a fast speed that was comparable to Mach 1. It didn't produce a sonic boom since it was small or probably hard to notice.
Leveling System in Apocalypse World
Action · PBOM2004
I know im late on this. but if he has a creation drill he doesn't exactly need an unlimited ammo glock. he can make his own ammo.
"You bastard!!!" The Burly man cursed at Leo as the blind that came from the flashbang slowly disappeared. He quickly points his revolver anywhere and prepared for an ambush but after some time Leo didn't come out.
Leveling System in Apocalypse World
Action · PBOM2004
I've been playing too much borderlands to not smile and think this thing is going to have bad damage...
[Save a Girl: You owe this girl your life when you were trying to survive in the apocalypse, now it is your time to save her. (Hint: White Silver hair) Quest Rewards: Glock 19 with Unlimited ammo, 1 Level]
Leveling System in Apocalypse World
Action · PBOM2004
*spoiler warning* to be fair, he does find out about all the features of nano fairly quickly. I am reading the webtoon, so I know I could have missed parts or it could be way off. but I found it only slightly annoying when he didn't understand.
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make sure to recharge your bodied waters daily kids!
As Luke assumed the upper side were unused, Luke placed his uniform onto it and began marching toward the bathroom. After a long journey, his face needs a recharge of waters.
Time Space User System
Fantasy · Billy_Castellanos
didn't jizo(?) say that there were nine? so why are only seven remembered in society?
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Level Up Legacy
Fantasy · MellowGuy
higher*
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Level Up Legacy
Fantasy · MellowGuy
im a little lost. so, when he first got his legacy. it took 15 min to replenish 1 mana. but it now is said to take 15 min to replenish 2 mana. does this mean a 15 min break just fully replenishes his mana, or is his natural regen rate just fighter than his mana cap?
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Level Up Legacy
Fantasy · MellowGuy
I know the author is 80 chaps in already. but I really hope the spacing between lines gets improved. the whole story seems chunky and is made of run on sentences. it isn't too bad, but with the improper English, and repeating lines. it gets annoying and difficult to read.
ch 0 2 The Day the Earth changed (Part-2)
A technomancer’s journey in an apocalyptic world
Sci-fi · SagelyDaoist