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Daaaammmnnn New Idea with New Concept, New ways, New purpose!! I think I will love this just fine as white beach sand!! .....................

Really? Can you recommend those ff, really need a good brain reformatting..

Haha freedom then Harem .. .🤣🤣Ridiculous , one of the start Ups I believe that fall at the end, not recommended highly not recommended .. .. .

Perfect Example of Flawless Imprfection! What a Master Piece if I do say so. Very Definitive of depicting a the characters' development and intaraction with himself. Also description of the OG Characters are awesome! I don't see the wrongs here, definitely recommendable to read if you want a not so perfect mc and exact detailing of characters and actions .

Innocent ones, please stir away from this section ,try hard as you can. .. A scum is in Tha making, an ambised author is writing, and a squadron of jerkers are waiting. Please turn away now. .. I will abandon ship .For this story are not riding a single ship but multiple of it. Anyway all good if you ignore the smut and horny thoughts the author depicts the MC so yeah your good to go. .. But it's downright disastrous for my 13 yrs old mind, God forsake me😔

Yeaaahhh give me a high five brother, tats a good one

The Author DEPICTS the abilities too much with power, is that what your saying?

Hey mysoginist scum there are no ranking on males shit head, if that guy is beta what that makes you? A chopped brown part of the banana?

We know tat it's a fanfiction, but still one got to write something that makes sense if one decides to share what s going on in one's feeble brain right? I mean if your not gonna take it seriously why did you do it? For fun? What's the fun with writing ? To frustrate people? People who are already mad with their current life and the cause of them leaning this side of internet for Reality escape. If you don't understand that's good for you ! Because you don't have to suffer ounce of what we were put through to what you're experiencing right now.

May I add also the Starting Package, specifically the 'not so' starting package?

Totally right man, you have one megamind in yo head, didn't notice that mishaps before

Bad suggestion🙄 10 member? Fu K that it's like saying having a 10 pig so that you can replace them from the hyenas and foxes you used to have downright debauchery you suggesting here

I gave up on after chapter 3... Can't put up with the opness of the MC the writer putting him up to be... Spoiler Alert, Lucifer skill from Tensura from a not so starter package. (author use the 'ss ticket' card to downright show the mc's MIGHTYNESS) Gacha pull are FUCKINGBULLSHIT!! What the fuck!! It's like taking advantage to your stepmom for the first time on first meeting and then downright Ball x But Smashing!! Don't read if you don't want bullshit ruining your brain, read if your brain are already dead with the porn and ntr you guys are reading. But me I'm outta here......

Writing Quality :Pretty Understandable, Fine Grammar but Messy Layout Story Development: In my Opinion it's Interesting because of the Novel Idea Character Design: I don't know what to put here, but base of what Ive seen so far, only females are focused by the writer. Like how he put emphasis on body measurements of characters, specifically /ussualy females. Updating Stability:Super Fine, writer still has the motivation to write (as of 5th of May) so the updating is pretty fast, or maybe he has stash of chapters that he updates randomly. World Background :It's still unclear for now but as the story goes it becomes clearer. And that's my review of the story so far😅😅

*sigh* how far ave we fall... I wa suppose to say ,how far we've been but, ... *sigh*it's awesome... Used to be. .. IT was supposed to be a Friend System man!!! Goddamn it bruh! Thought it was a good guy fic and the Harem tag is just a fraud to shoo away dude like I... Dayum