forgot to add either ability, power or skill after powerful good luck man
Obviously, I sincerely doubted I had the time to go that route. So, my arguably most powerful was useless for now.
Book&Literature · Niggross
ch 21 Star-Filled Slumber
Book&Literature · Niggross
hope you get better soon
ch 36 Bad News
Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck
plauge should be plague :)
This paragraph has been deleted.
Movies · AngelusSanguis
Daimyo not daminyon
"Well, they have to be recognised by the Daminyon. Pay taxes to the Lord and report to the authorities." He told me.
Anime & Comics · Fat_Cultivator
you put him instead of her for the mothers gender
"Eh, I don't really care about him now. Endeavor though, that's another story."
Anime & Comics · Damaine_N
switch i and felt easy mistake good luck
Felt I Aika's cute little snores as her naked lithe frame clung onto mine. Last night I might have gone a little overboard by going five times in a row. But she started it.
Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck
why is is the lifestyle magic cap here 7 i know on another person the cap was 5 does it just vary or is it a different kind altogether so it has a bigger cap?
Skills: [Inspect(MAX)], [Helm Splitter(MAX)], [Critical Pick(MAX)], [Mineral Pulse(MAX)], [Material Storage(MAX)], [On-Site Repairs(MAX)], [Hammer Smash(MAX)], [Explosive Rune(7/10)], [Rune of Binding(7/10)], [Peachy Plummet(4/10)], [Leg Vice(2/10)], [Lifestyle Magic(7/7)]
Fantasy · Einlion
ooh i have a suggestion for the shop maybe a once a month purchase from one of the games a client has played and the purchase can be a perk or something. also this has been great so far good luck author live well and prosper
ch 22 22 - West Point and Klamath
Movies · AngelusSanguis
i don't know why i find it funny that he named himself after a place that holds dead people. probably cause he is physically dead lol
"Yeah, yeah..." repeated Adam, pressing the slot for his IWN and simply typing in [Cairn]. He had never been good at choosing names, so using his previous IWN seemed like a fairly safe bet. Choosing anything more 'meta' was a good way to become a laughingstock in the community.
Fantasy · Einlion
yes but then it comes to the fact that, that part of immersion makes the rest of the game significantly more hard due to suspicions of the player being a spy of some sort and having someway to hide their chakra levels and only revealing it bit by bit to simulate growth. the game is not for trained proffesionals in espionage or anything, it's for the general populace of the world making a game too difficult would simply make it so that people would stop playing it. it's easier to give up a tiny piece of immersion that most wont think about to maintain the player base instead.it could also just change the npc's idea on how the got to that level retroactively like saying that the training was more effective or some such and that's how they got that much chakra or they just already had a prodigious growth rate and that's how they had so much chakra . there are a variety of ways it can be done and i can't be bothered to list them all
I put all 10 points into my Chakra, since I knew I could train my physical body.
Anime & Comics · Fat_Cultivator
chapter rate is fine my only issue here is that gai's title is the green beast of konoha not blue, you need to change the the title he got to something like rising blue beast or make it the appropriate color here
ch 15 Chapter 15: Blue Beast of Konoha
Anime & Comics · Fat_Cultivator
here is a bit better of a reason why it's not important as the author says this a game world and as such the creators/the ai of the game can add restrictions to it such as the npc's not noticing a players spike in chakra, this restriction wouldbe there to prevent immersion disruption of the players. I hope my explanation works better for you than the authors did.
I put all 10 points into my Chakra, since I knew I could train my physical body.
Anime & Comics · Fat_Cultivator
it's kaneki not kenaki simple mistake have a good day
One option is to simply jump down, but the other, cooler option, is to use my freaky blood ribbon things that grow from my back and use them to hang upside down so they can only see my face without looking up.
Anime & Comics · Bored_MC
just checked and yeah its goldilocks
A/N: RWBY is basically a spin-off of various series. I don't know where Yang is based-off but I'm pretty sure it's somewhere.
Anime & Comics · Charlottes
probably goldilocks but it could also be some saiyan because one of her songs the lyrics mention going super saiyan though that may just have been a nice little thing they put in
A/N: RWBY is basically a spin-off of various series. I don't know where Yang is based-off but I'm pretty sure it's somewhere.
Anime & Comics · Charlottes
it's not weird this chapter has brought a new side of our beloved mc to light in the DxD arc he was not very nice due to the various developments that happened during it where as in this chapter we saw a surprisingly nice side of him with the resurrection of Ed and Al's mother which was not something that was required of him and it shows a growth of character which for most readers is very enjoyable even if they don't necessarily notice why in the moment.
ch 113 FMA 1
Anime & Comics · ExoticSenta
small spelling error trough should be through
Trough Gemstones I gained:
Anime & Comics · DaoistKQnDFL
yeah this one is a bit much
Hizashi shook his head and replied, "I don't know, but I have a premonition that you will become even more powerful than the Hokage. Maybe you can call it a premonition of someone who is going to die. I came here to ask you if you could please protect my son when you become able to do so."
Anime & Comics · Hkj
you have a couple of spots where the words have no spaces for a few words may wanna go back and fix that but other than interesting chapter
ch 20 Chapter 20: Longing x Longinus
Highschool DxD: Dragon's Ascent
Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck