Marvin_Lynn - Profile

do not drop this i like this story so please keep it going

what is going on is this dropped or just stalled...........................?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

It is a great story. The author is not a pro, but does a great job trying to get things right. Story development is only slow because of the posting rate. World background could use a little work, but it is understandable and clear enough to give you a feeling it is there. Character development is slow but thats do to yhe chaotic nature of the character. i enjoy this book and hope it continues.