I did waste half an hour and no results so far. Would really appreciate if you were to give a link
ch 0 1 Ch-1 The Orphan of the Hyuga Clan
Anime & Comics · Hkj
nah. if hiruzen is alive that means orochi;s hands and jutsu are functional
ch 90 The Chunin Exams - 16
Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0
Nah... Naruto is a lousy father and husband. Hinata deserves better
ch 58 The Grind Continues - 3
Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0
why? whats the point? MC just created a whole lot of problems for himself
ch 50 Refuge In Audacity 1
Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0
So far the premise is interesting
ch 0 2 The Reader System
Sci-fi · NMinh
I am gonna become Sanada's waifu, shannaro!
ch 64 Ch 63 : Dangerous situation
Anime & Comics · Rysangel
I hope the relationship would be with Shizune in the end - a very rarely included love interest. For characters it can be Gambit from Marvel or any Mugiwara teammate, or Kenshin or Baki. Maybe just maybe making some chakra guns or simply using water pistol jutsu/ Possibilities are endless.
ch 27 Ch 26 : Before the exam
Anime & Comics · Rysangel
if its not an organic part of the plot pls dont do it. (By the way Gambit from Marvel has cool ability - might use it as a card)
ch 21 - What if Chapter 1- Kurenai Yuhi.
Anime & Comics · Rysangel
Donquixote Doflamingo to master chakra strings. Seriously they can be used everywhere. You can make your own original techniques like chakra wheels for speed, whips, wire mines from Dishonored (monofilament wires cutting everyone and such). If Sasori and Kankuro can use them to hold and move puppets why not try to use them as teleqinesis or strengthenings like exoskeleton. Dont forget the infamous butler from Hellsing.
3. Next character card ( I mean, Giyuu is good, but I haven't read demon slayer at all, so I guess I should try to do some research first as to not make a silly mistake regarding his power.)
Anime & Comics · Rysangel
yes or Shizune (Tsunade's apprentice - my favourite female from the series)
2. Should there be a student-teacher relationship or not?
Anime & Comics · Rysangel
Whats the point in this uniform? Its not an armor! Secrecy? Rule of Cool? Pretty sure people will be asking questions and any sensor of chakra or inuzuka or hyuga or aburame wil be able to identify him if they pay attention and presumably they will. Little bit childish i think + mask as it is will decrease field of vision and that is deadly in this past paced ninja world (i might only assume that ANBU masks are fitted perfectly to the personnel). Armor without helmet is somehow OK yet helmet without armor is asking for trouble.
ch 39 Chapter 39 - Operation Start!
Anime & Comics · Odyin
Making his own team at best. 1)Avengers will lay under the goverment and its funny because the reason why people become superheroes is the fact that the goverment doesnt care about people 2)Wakanda is a bunch of barbarians with a high tech weapons. Massive country with all the resourses concentrated on a royal family. There is only one Panther and everybody else is running around with ultrasophisticated overimproved versions of shields and spears thinking that somehow spears and rhinos are better than firearms and heavy armored transport. Having energy fields incorporated into cloaks doesnt compensate for the basic design flaws. And they are desiding on their leader by a trial of combat for gods sake! They have got tribes and shi... council with representatives. They are unreliable. 3) Inhumans - caste system and all that jazz. Unreliable bunch of weirdos with a scewed psyche and physiology. 4)X-man... maybe as mercenary force after talking about Greater good with Albus Dumb.. Ehhmm.. Xavier. Sell them the idea that fighting for world peace is a good commercial to the public eye. 5)As he is a Batman/Luthor/Holmes - much better to train his own troops instead of a happy rag-tag gaggle of people that have never worked together and have different interests. Army is not a council - it takes a solid structure and all the heroes in Marvel are teenage kids in mind and behaviour. Just because they can tank a missle, fly at supersonic speeds and throw plama bolts doesnt mean that they can get the shit done. P.S. Please dont let his secret identity leak because *wink, wink* Civil War and goverment and powerstruggle. Being anonimous fighter is better i believe. He is a Batman for Christs sake!
ch 66 Announcement
Anime & Comics · Anubis_Creationz
i kind of wanted for hero not to become OP in terms of raw strength. Really was hoping for MC to really put the memory part of Batman Luther and Holmes to use but this chapter indicates more of a standard "grab powers, use these powers to grab more power then bruteforce everything till win at life. I hope i am wrong on that part.
ch 0 3 Meeting the Ancient One
Anime & Comics · MightyOzy
Oakland huh... "Lovely" place for a child to grow in=) https://spotcrime.com/ca/oakland
When young Erik Stevens awoke in his lower bunk bed at the orphanage he flinched at the memories pouring though his head. He decided there and then he would be Erik Stevens aka N'Jadaka to pay respects to his deceased father in this life. Thinking about his rough childhood where the orphanage is run on government benefits making it tight for the owners to provide everything for the children. Being understaffed as well being in the crime driven area of Oakland California meant that future prospects for most children was not very high. Erik was very lucky as the US government have accepted him with scholarship in the junior cadet program meaning he will be able to train safely at a gym and have dorms with better bedding and resources to prepare himself with.
Anime & Comics · MightyOzy
MC is a kind of retard. If you run you run - instead he starts a flashy fight with bloodthirsty screams of a standard villain. And how the hell nobody questions his ability to speak with him being stuck in a cell alone for his whole life?
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Anime & Comics · Mohammed_Jawad
Awesome. Interesting choice of a talent though. I would have chosen ninjutsu and Water Style Finger Pistol to go with it. X-ray vision plus an analogue of a firearm is ought to be a power of its own especially if you have smoke grandes or Hidden Mist jutsu=)