SugaryLemonWater

2d

Posted

This novel is pretty solid, MC's first harem member is his mother and she is an absolute baddie. The plot is also pretty interesting. [img=coins]

Descendant of The Dual Cultivation Progenitor

Fantasy · SupremeChadd

SugaryLemonWater

10d

Commented

Bro didn't even think for a second

"Do tell" Alcan spoke shortly, further boring Xylaraea, "I will help you pass through this gate, and in retu-" her words were cut short as Alcan interfered, "Deal"

Descendant of The Dual Cultivation Progenitor

Fantasy · SupremeChadd

SugaryLemonWater

10d

Posted

I have only read the first chapter so far and can't say much about the rest of the novel (as its not out as of me writing this review) but I will say that this is an amazing cover! Fire!

Descendant of The Dual Cultivation Progenitor

Fantasy · SupremeChadd

SugaryLemonWater

1mth

Posted

I'm writing this second review only because I'm curious if I can write two reviews back to back, also will my old review be deleted. Just testing it out, if its not just read the old review. PS: the newest chapter 52 was high key fire.

Father of Eternity

Fantasy · Eternal_Federation

SugaryLemonWater

2mth

Commented

thou has cooketh

ch 13 Closer to Rank 1

Father of Eternity

Fantasy · Eternal_Federation

SugaryLemonWater

2mth

Commented

Relating to Louie rn

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Father of Eternity

Fantasy · Eternal_Federation

SugaryLemonWater

2mth

Commented

INSANE TONE CHANGE!!!

ch 10 First Subject

Father of Eternity

Fantasy · Eternal_Federation

SugaryLemonWater

2mth

Commented

inflation

He spread Honeyed Crimson Butter on top of bread made from Windsought Wheat from the Notus Empire. He was at first surprised at the price of Honeyed Crimson Butter, which was 100 whole gc, but he decided to buy it after learning it could only be made with manual magic guidance.

Father of Eternity

Fantasy · Eternal_Federation

SugaryLemonWater

2mth

Commented

nice chapter! [img=coins] [img=exp] [img=coins]

ch 0 6 Proposal

Father of Eternity

Fantasy · Eternal_Federation

SugaryLemonWater

2mth

Commented

corruption, love it.

Isaiah nodded, "Yes. All I need is 5 convicts to go missing..." He winked, "and a permit with government's signature to be able to enter and do work in the mana mines. Obviously, it would come in handy if you could provide me with protection within the mines."

Father of Eternity

Fantasy · Eternal_Federation

SugaryLemonWater

2mth

Commented

I'm glad he changed his name

"Miss Chloe, there is a man waiting outside claiming to be the nephew of Mr. Louie," she asked the more experienced receptionist, Chloe. "Oh? Did Tresr came to visit?" Chloe asked. The girl replied right after, "He told me his name was Isaiah."

Father of Eternity

Fantasy · Eternal_Federation

SugaryLemonWater

2mth

Commented

I honestly thought he would have some type of supreme talent, unless he already has a hidden supreme dragon phoenix talent lol

ch 0 4 Real Business

Father of Eternity

Fantasy · Eternal_Federation

SugaryLemonWater

2mth

Commented

This guy and his hate for machines

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Father of Eternity

Fantasy · Eternal_Federation

SugaryLemonWater

2mth

Posted

A pretty solid start, it's also quite well written. The MC, Isaiah, seems like he knows what's up. Considering his transmigration method and its aftermath, he is pretty ruthless. The city is also described to be quite cool. It only has 2 chapter so keep it up, it definitely has potential 👍👍👍