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It would be good for MC to realize the true potential of his talent as soon as possible, because anything can actually be a talent. Talent literally means something that is naturally given to us. (Although everything below is called ability if we think of it in the singular, if we think of it in the plural, those who are superior in this regard among people are called naturally talented. (For example, archery actually depends largely on our innate ability in good eyesight, instinct, muscle memory and hand-eye coordination. ) If we think of it this way, our five senses and our hidden sixth sense, our level of focus, our level of understanding the things happening around us, our level of understanding and imitating them, our level of information processing, our level of obtaining information, our ability to digest the nutrients we biologically consume, our ability to heal, another example is actually Actions that we express with words such as willpower, determination, ambition, love, but which are actually carried out biologically due to hormones etc. are also abilities. I think he should also acquire the ability to adapt.

It would be great if MC takes Minato as his heir. Considering the similarity of attunement to Sage Mode, only Minato who has achieved perfect Sage Mode is qualified to become the heir. Also, his personality is compatible with Mc, as the person below said, I would like it more if he adopted Minato and became his father and teacher.

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter.

(I wrote a lot but I'm glad you took my advice. Your story has potential and I thought if it was written properly it would be a story I would want to read for a long time because the plot is good but 100 rounds is too much so I thought you would stop writing soon. That's why I wanted to help you fully understand the logic of the system with my own thoughts. This is my last comment and my last suggestion for now, and based on what I read, I recommended how you should do power building in general, I hope you don't stop writing.)I agree more or less with what you said, you did not say that the system is perfect, but at least the system should give the rewards appropriately, if it does not give the rewards appropriately, no one can win the 100-round game. It is completely illogical to play a game that cannot be won because it has no meaning. In my proposed system, I would divide the way players gain power into three main types. (system based, class based and mission world based) The first type explains itself by its name, for example, if you complete an impossible++ level task on the first try, you will encounter almost no difficulties in the next 10 rounds because you have successfully completed an extremely difficult task. The second type focuses on classes that can stand against the system. I can't comment much about it because you didn't explain much. The third type is the type that aims to gain something from the worlds it enters, for example, the main character went to Dragon Ball and made a useful wish there, he went to MCU and managed to get the power stones or somehow learned the power system of the worlds he went to. Just by looking at these I see many ways to get stronger, you can reach tremendous levels of power through the appropriate worlds, in which case the rewards from the system are not needed much.But I doubt your system will do this, if I remember correctly, no one has been successful, right? Such a situation indicates that either the missions are very difficult and you cannot complete them no matter what path you use, or there is a way to win but it is extremely difficult to achieve, for example, you can complete each task perfectly and completely complete your profession. The situation where you can use and fully exploit entire worlds. The system I imagine while reading your story is an entity that prevents these conditions from occurring. There is a way for you to win but it's almost impossible because the system doesn't want anyone to beat their game easily.

Author I like and enjoy your story so far. I hope that writing such long comments and comments that seem to change the system completely will not cause negative consequences for you. I hope you read my suggestions completely and understand what I mean, if you like what I say and my recommendations, I will explain why the system gives a worthless reward to the character expecting the maximum reward when the first reward is given, and why the number of trials is high and in each unsuccessful attempt, the system re-evaluates the task and rearranges the rewards, but this is not shown. You can explain it as follows.

I made suggestions by making long comments and this is my last suggestion (at least for now). The reward and task system is very flawed from my point of view, first of all, when you first gave the task, the task was impossible+++, but after 6 tries, Akira got stronger and it is still impossible+++, there is no point in this, the most logical system is to re-evaluate the difficulty of the task after each loop according to your current strength and knowledge and change the difficulty accordingly. and awards will be given. In such a case, the system should work as follows, the Akira task should be completed without repeating it too much and when the difficulty of winning is at its hardest. After all, the more it is repeated, the less the difficulty decreases and the less the final reward it will receive.

The evaluation of the system seems to be based only on pure power and techniques, unfortunately at weak power levels, especially when there is a situation where you can injure your opponent in different ways, factors such as fighting intelligence, tactics, weapons, poisons, acids can be the key to winning the fight. For example, in all the tours, Yor always entered through the window and did not use any other way. A character determined to defeat his enemy had already placed traps in the window and in the room. That's why my suggestion is that the reward you receive depends not only on how you complete it, but also on how long it takes you.

I'm currently reading a series called usogui and I'm confident that the main character Baku can defeat yor in the first round using various tactics. Even if not in the first round, he will definitely beat yor in the 2nd round. By the way, I should mention that Baku is much weaker than an ordinary person. From the spoilers I received, he has a big problem in his heart and does not even have the stamina to climb a few flights of stairs.

impossible? Not quite like that. The mission was to defeat Yor in the war. I am 100% sure that someone with enough experience can defeat Yor in the first round by using external factors.

I'm sorry if it's not clear, I wrote it in terrible English without using a translator. In short, what I mean is that a perfect score should be given in a situation where the task is done perfectly. In the current mission, the perfect situation should only occur in a situation where the main character defeats the enemy in the first round without difficulty and without getting injured.

Max point? He shouldnt get it this. İf someone get max point this quest they beat yor with no diff in first loop.he is now sixth loop if he get max point its ridiculous.

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Author, I stand firmly behind the suggestion I gave. Ayanokouji is a good choice for reincarnation. It would be nice for him to feel family love fully in this life, especially since he had never felt family love in the past. Ayanokouji's attempt to make sense of this unrequited, unlimited, warm and protective love will make reading interesting

If the baby is someone reincarnated I would like it to be Ayanokouji Kiyotaka, he could bring an interesting dynamic with his lack of revealing emotions. ais is a good choice with him.

I read the end of the chapter and saw that you decided to have twin girls. Whatever it is, you're the writer. The Ayanokouji dynamic would still be interesting.

If the baby is someone reincarnated I would like it to be Ayanokouji Kiyotaka, he could bring an interesting dynamic with his lack of revealing emotions