I don't have a problem with it tho, his previous work was good, so I'd feel better if he sticks to the same genre.
ch 0 2 A Team Forced to Pick a Slacker
Games · Adui
"I guess that's what being a sorcerer is all about", I'm pretty sure you should move the "is" to after "sorcerer".
Oh man, I have advanced quite a lot, and my Mana and Magic keep getting higher, I guess that's what is being a sorcerer all about…
Fantasy · PancakesWitch
Wait, so none of these "masters" noticed he has a slave collar on? Or maybe I'm missing something. It would be weird bc a bunch of kids knew what it was, so if the elder doesn't notice, this would be a easily fixable plot hole.
ch 80 Duel After 7 Years
Fantasy · Elyon
Turns out there's a reason in the last few chapters
Ah, got it. Thanks!
"Tank takes two, Cinder takes two, and I'll take two. Lilly you help support us from the back along with your other pets." Joshua explained getting nods from the others as he started to walk towards the group of ants. He felt the extra surge of strength from Flutter using her boost ability on him and he was completely ready to charge forward. Joshua took the lead as he charged in to take on the two ants towards the center. He started the fight by using his heroic shout to draw all the attention of the ants towards him. The ants let out angry screeches as they chomped their pincers together before charging towards him. He charged an aura blast into his sword and sent it crashing towards the two center ants knocking them back from the force of the blow. Of course the hard exoskeleton kept the attack from doing much damage from so far away, but it did exactly what Joshua expected and he continued to race towards the two knocked back ants.
Urban · VivitheGreat
Can't a novice beast tamer only have two pets active at once? How does he get a buff from Flutter while Tank and Cinder are fighting? I might have missed something idk.
"Tank takes two, Cinder takes two, and I'll take two. Lilly you help support us from the back along with your other pets." Joshua explained getting nods from the others as he started to walk towards the group of ants. He felt the extra surge of strength from Flutter using her boost ability on him and he was completely ready to charge forward. Joshua took the lead as he charged in to take on the two ants towards the center. He started the fight by using his heroic shout to draw all the attention of the ants towards him. The ants let out angry screeches as they chomped their pincers together before charging towards him. He charged an aura blast into his sword and sent it crashing towards the two center ants knocking them back from the force of the blow. Of course the hard exoskeleton kept the attack from doing much damage from so far away, but it did exactly what Joshua expected and he continued to race towards the two knocked back ants.
Urban · VivitheGreat
Bet, ty
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Games · Tamaki_Leon
Alright, sounds good. Keep it up bro, amazing story so far!
As the monster was weakened, his stats were lowered, including his flee and defense (FLEE 3, DEF 10). So Ye Yan could hit it in 13 damage per attack.
Games · Daydream_Wanderer
Sauce?
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Games · Tamaki_Leon
What does the FLEE stat mean? Is it like evasion? And how does the number work, is it like a 3% chance to miss with 3 FLEE?
As the monster was weakened, his stats were lowered, including his flee and defense (FLEE 3, DEF 10). So Ye Yan could hit it in 13 damage per attack.
Games · Daydream_Wanderer
Volcano and not Vulcan right?
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Games · Daydream_Wanderer
Should be Elder Treants right?
His enemies this time were enemies he had come across before, the grasslands being filled with a large amount of Elder Treats- enormous trees with hard defenses and thick branches to strangle their enemies with.
My Idle Gaming System
Games · Adui