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This book had a great potential to become one of the foremost post-apocalyptic novels. But the author is very bad at creating a compelling plot. The characters are 4/5 the world building is 2/5 but the story development and plot is 1/5. The MC dedicate hümsepf to becoming tithe best blacksmith ever. Even though it is an apocalypse setting, people are dying, civilization has collapsed, and he can easily be someone with great ability to be one of the most important foundations of human race. He just ignores them and just keeps grinding crafting levels. Occasionally changing the full load out of everyone orbiting himself. Even though they are pretty useless in the grand scheme of things. He gets kidnapped and enslacedand they decide to wait for him to come back home after escaping his new masters.

Oh I know what the Jedi sentinels were capable of, not that I've seen anything about them in the movies mind you. I just don't know if Ol Palpy did something spesific to neutralize them.

I have no idea what Palpatine did against sentinels. Where can I read/watch it? Although after the prequels Star Wars franchise is practically dead to me, I spent too many years adoring the Star Wars to do a clean break.

This must be the most exhausting book I've ever read. Ninety percent of the words in a chapter are redundant and pointless. Every sentence is full of overly elaborate descriptions waxing poetic about things of no particular importance. I've had conniption fits reading about the structure of the house he is planning of building. It reads like a Victorian era romance novel. I really wanted to read this story, as i love the genre but this is pretty much the worst example of AI assisted writing I've seen recently.

Technically this is a well written story with pretty good English. But the MC is so unsuitable for post apocalyptic survival he is failing to change anything from the prior lives. The Author created the most badly done and inefficient doomsday prepper ever written on fiction. The MC is flailing around like a fish out of water failing to plan for his survival and failing to enact his badly created plans like "obtaining weapons". The MC is a retired cop but I believe a random high school student would do just a good a job.

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