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ITs quite good. First time i see fanfic of this novel and really like it. keep going author!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

have caught up to all the chapters and as of right now the fiction is pretty good. well written and nice read. only thing is that character hasn't trained supposed to be infant in strength and is blasting through doors. it was explained he did it because of ki but doesn't really makes sense. also he is martial artist hasn't trained yet and he went from 1 strength to more than 30 just by meeting people. at least let him use Bakis image training or smth so his strength gain will be more believable.

it's a good story, easy to read and no grammar mistakes. on the other hand the main character is lacking a lot. in the beginning it was fun read, challenges, becoming stronger and so on.. but he has no ambition, his conquerer haki makes no sense because he is just being obedient. yeah he might say he is against it but still does what he is told. no ambition, no direction. I read until 90 chapter hoping it would get better but no change. good luck author

have read up to 23 chapters and I am Pleasantly surprised usually when you get Novels with systems they get overpowered very soon and chase girls This is much better work author🔥🔥Good luck and keep writing