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I really like this story but Fujin as a character doesn't feel fleshed out at all. His motives seem to just be survival, he has no friend, no family, no gf, no one he trusts completely. He feels like a really sad character - he just seems to fundamentally lack any emotion. His emotions just don't fluctuate. His teammate, who he grew up with and shed blood with is killed for no reason and he just shrugs. He prepared himself but still he just seems like a total waste of a character. It just gets boring when an mc doesn't really emotionally interact with the world at all. Great worldbuilding and interesting thoughts on developing techniques. Interesting to see someone push wind element so far. Development of Hirashin is a bit too expected and boring. The review feels harsh but it's because the story has so much potential.

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Why why why do you need to make him ridiculously OP so quickly? It makes everything so boring. It has so much potential as a storyline but the execution is just completely butchered. Falls into the trap of most stories on this site.