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questioned or interrogated

While I see the potential in this concept, I'm not entirely sold on the idea of incorporating the Naruto manga directly into the storyline. However, I could envision a scenario where, after a significant passage of time, the protagonist discovers an unusual ability tied to their manga creations. Perhaps, after a decade or so, they unexpectedly realize that they can manifest abilities or traits from their manga characters. This could lead to helping to fight kaguya's clan. Alternatively, the narrative could take a different turn where government officials from the village approach the protagonist, seeking their expertise in crafting a propaganda piece. In this scenario, the protagonist reluctantly agrees to write a story based on Naruto, the seventh hokage. He draws them with permission and visits each of them to exapnd beyond the naruto manga. This is just my opinion though. Unlike the original chinese novel that inspired this, I would want to see an ending where he writes original works. I think it is possible because literature in naruto world seems to be based on romance or simply ninja. It started to only evolve in boruto. In the end, I don't want him to suddenly start drawing stuff about naruto without any reason. It would just be a plot-killing of iq for him to not be interrogated, not root-style since it is boruto era, but still.

I would rather him be a Playboy of sorts. A harem is weird in a hero setting with the abilities of Batman.

I appreciate the effort put into this piece, but it feels somewhat lacking in its understanding of cultivation tropes. I never read Against the Gods to be honest but I would like a more deep view. Additionally, the perspective on the world portrayed seems like he is looking through only one perspective. In a sceintific way, rather than several different ways. Xianxia stories possess a distinct charm, and incorporating more of their good elements could enhance the narrative's richness and depth. Perhaps, he reads some fictional books there. This is just my opinion though. I'm not saying he seems arrogant but he assumes his morality and his way of the world is better. I simply want him to recognize he is not in his universe anymore, or at least the genre of the world eventually. And humble himself as well. Overall, 8/10

pretty good.

wish you could update this

honestly, him having a relationship with fortuna seems more healthy than lily right now.

great premise!

Is this completely Yuri? Not like I dislike that, but I would like to see characters such as Todoroki or Izuku being romanced. Personally, I always felt sympathy towards the love she felt in canon for she was changing herself in order to love others. I'm always for toga ships......

good premise.

does he not have the erasure technique? I honestly don't get the point of gods in dbs if they do not have that power to reign at the top. I would get why people would want him killed if he doesn't have any significant differences. the only reason I would see a spot like that is needed is either because all universes would collapse due to the lack of an omni king.

eh any of those options will get him kill or assassinated by hydra, or scouted by shield. he should literally just copywriter some books or work at a newspaper place.

are you updating?

are you talking about the ben 10 fanfc where the SI married Sona in DXD? That was pretty good. I think you should stop saying true world or real world btw. It sort of makes reading it less immersive. Thanks for the update though!

What is the name of the mtl?

Honestly, can't she just prevent the player mechanism from happening. I would rather fix the world of 2138 and fix the world of overlord. Ainz is a idiot because he's barely educated.

Honestly, 2 or 3. If he travels in the future by an artifact, it's fine. But looking at his age, it would be weird if it's just time passing.

I was hoping for momonga to come too. Sorry for mentioning this since it was already mentioned. It's fine though. IWill she reveal to the npcs they were video games or stumble through it like momonga and say she was born a spider or something.