Pureblood_Uchiha - Profile

Good novel author if you continue like this your novel can become one of the best novels in this platform. I have some suggestions for you: - According to my analysis you chose a devouring fallen angel at the beginning because of the weakness of the MC so you can continue this momentum by making the second fallen angel made for the cultivation of the body like the true power dao of from the novel fate destroying emperor and it will be more interesting if there are three paths for cultivation in your novel like: soul path, energy path, body path and body cells are the dantians of body path cultivators but this path is difficult so few people take it but our MC with the fallen angel of devoration does not have this problem. - the third fallen angel can allow the MC to cultivate his dao heart which is very important for cultivation and therefore the first three angels must allow him to have a solid foundation. - the fourth fallen angel can allow the MC to control the akashic records which governs knowledge and all things related to knowledge, thus making him become truly OP because he will know himself, will know his enemies (like sons of destinies). - the fifth fallen angel can allow the MC to become immortal or eternal like the eternal emperors of the novel fate desrroying emperor. - Finally, after laying the foundations for a good base, the other fallen angels can have powers such as fate law manipulation which allows you to control absolutely everything and anything (even laws) or creation law manipulation which allows you to create absolutely everything or anything (even laws) or destruction law manipulation which allows you to destroy absolutely everything or anything (even laws).