don't she have any better item to give light at her level. Even if she doesn't why would she manually put wood to it. It should have only needed a thought to set a bonfire.
When Lu Qingyun regained his consciousness, he found himself lying in a cave and saw that the veiled maiden was putting woods into a small bonfire.
Eastern · Avidfan
this is not realistic at all, he can influence fights that far above him without even cultivating that far why would he even bother cultivating further
The golden flames of the golden roc would actually dissolve such a puny attack but weirdly enough, the rock began to disintegrate and exploded furiously in mid-air. Although the minute explosion was impressive but the protective aura of the golden roc was too formidable. It was actually only a minute distraction.
Eastern · Avidfan
The guy who is new to cultivation is giving expert commentary on a fight at the peak level, without running for his own life. He shouldn't be able to process a fight that far above him. This is quite disappointing.
Lu Qingyun was smiling bitterly as he thought, "This poor maiden won't be able to stand a chance against the claws of this golden roc…"
Eastern · Avidfan
I find both mc's traits of over analyzing things as well as her laziness extremely annoying
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it's only confusing in these starting paragraphs
After all, Hydral was very reasonable, and he also never reasoned.
Fantasy · POWER_
it's kind of confusing when you use Hydral to refer to the family, territory as well as the mc.
After all, Hydral was very reasonable, and he also never reasoned.
Fantasy · POWER_
I'm sure there is plenty of yuri lovers here, me Included. It's just that yuri haters are the once that are more vocal about it. In the end it's up to you authors to decide what you should write. The funny thing is even though I can enjoy stories that doesn't have yuri when it's directly mentioned in the synopsis or a comment it's highly likely that It will turn me away from that novel.
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This is extremely illogical. It would have made much more since if had a inheritance of an immortal. Only way to rationalize this is by thinking that this guy is one in a billion genius that is totally ignorant about the fact that he is such a genius. It's ridiculous to think that all the doctors in the nation all incompetent.
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Eastern · CloudBeneathMoon
If this is the city they usually gets supplies from shouldn't he be aware of this stuff already. More information than a random store should have been available in his sect as well.
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Eastern · CloudBeneathMoon
It's simpler and more accurate to just say he's a genius at the stuff. I don't think our modern logic or technology is worth much in a cultivation world. In a cultivation world only mortals will be impressed with something like that and cultivators will have technology and conveniences far outstripping them. For example spirits that exceeds ai, memory transference to learn techniques, stones that can record stuff in 3d, storage rings, etc.
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Eastern · CloudBeneathMoon
This isn't transmigration; it's regression + isekai. He should suspect it to be reincarnation at the moment because there is no body takeover happening.
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Eastern · CloudBeneathMoon
groin --> groan
When trying to remember something his head started to hurt on all of a sudden, feeling the aching all over his head , he held it with both of his hands while giving a low groin.
Fantasy · Saltedfish_me
you are ones more forgetting the cultivation difference. How the heck is it possible for her reaction to be slow when every action he takes happens in slow motion to her.
He noted that her reaction was a little slow when he had called her name. It seemed that she was using an alias and that Meixue was not her real name at all. Taking note of this, he said. "This gift is too precious for me to take. Actually I do not want anything…"
The Villainess is my Love Interest
Eastern · Avidfan