lime lol think you mean like
"I forgot they love the cold too...." I said and shook my head to the thought of freezing to death. Demons couldn't deal with the cold lime dragons and angels, so we could freeze in about three hours in the cold. As dragons and angels can stay in the cold for days and not get cold or freeze to death. I know that Destiny and Emily could use their magic to keep warm, but I was stuck with the time limit. Saying something would have made them worry about me than the mission at hand. Adam and the other boys should be focus on the battle.
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fix the last sentence
It was finally the day that Adam and I were waiting for. Our first S Class Mission and we had to work together with another group. But I have learned that Adam doesn't like to work with others. It took only a couple of months you get him to trust me. The only this was that the other group will ruin that in a heart beat.
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really good I love it a bit on the short side though but I know that you're babysitting right now
ch 0 7 Chapter 7 Memories
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shade should be jade
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this was good it didn't see any thing to fix good job and keep up the good work
ch 0 6 Chapter 6 Planning Our New Home
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check the second sentence it sounds weird
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ever been a couple of mistakes it was really good love you Lace
ch 23 Chapter 16 Training Day
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fix the first sentence it sounds weird
He walked over to an with less trees and wash more of a grass like area. Stood there and waited for me to come forward. It is a good idea for us to learn about our own abilities and push each other to our limits. So I walked over and summon my most powerful sword, the Petal Blade. A thing point blade with metal wrap around with a thorn look and the handle looked like three petals with a torn in it. This blade was dangerous, but was known for it great speed and healing abilities. The only thing was that it took blood from the welder in combat.
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booking needs to be cooking
I sat there fixing the tent and figuring out how to tell him. At ask him how he would feel about a friend lying to him. The tent was at least big enough to fit two people and for our bags to be inside. The booking supplies were next to the campfire and everything else was in the tent.
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I think you mean mind not middle
I didn't know what to think as Destiny kept calling me to come down. By bag was packed and ready, but my middle wondered to other things. My father was forced to leave and I don't know what is going to happen in the future. But I was snapped out by Adam grabbing my shoulder.
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this is great so far I can't wait for the next chapter
ch 0 3 Chapter 3 Willow Sweet Willow
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fix shot gun
"Agreed," she smiled and walked inside. Looking to see what was there for us to take with us. I didn't know was I needed, but it should be normal pistel ammo. But after a while Jade started to scream with joy. Looking over to see that she had a shock gun in hand with two boxes of ammo.
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I love the name
"See you next class," I smiled as the bell rang. Soon after I left I hear Noah dying "Maybe next time" before out the door. My next class was my favorite, Creature History with Mrs. Berry. She was half serpant and human from the Dooms Kingdom. Which was across the world and covered in desert. I only been there once to capture criminals and somehow did it without Destiny and Emily knowing.
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Lacey plz don't stop writing you are doing sooo good and I love helping you with us in hearing you talk about it it makes me happy to see how much you're enjoying it just like we used to when I was a freshman year we made it I love you and keep doing good work xoxo your best friend
ch 20 Question
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look at this Lacey
"Hey," Adam said with a smile
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I love it ❤❤❤
ch 0 9 Chapter 9 The Military Man
Dead Willow Book 1
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